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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby ithekro » Mon Mar 30, 2009 8:47 pm

Dawn of War: (Aquamarine 6)

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Even in war one must stay at the top of one's game. The KyoAni Empire is no exception. Thus it was decided that the Empire should hold a cross faction War Games to hone the skills of the Fleets. St. Nagato-chi tasked the Clannad Republic to perform a defensive action against multiple allied forces to simulate attack from multiple nations against the KyoAni Empire. Key Intelligence Officer Ichinose was assigned to plan the defense. Nagisa the Bold would be overall fleet commander for the defense while to change up things, the Starfish Warrior of Fuuko would provide their large platforms for a defensive role over their normal attack role.

St. Nagato's plan was to send her own forces along with the Hiiragi Fleet under the Legendary Kagami in to directly engage the Clannad Force. Key Border World of Misuzu's Forces would, in a reversal of roles, attempt to attack the Starfish Platforms with their defense forces.

The Battle seemed to be going well for St. Nagato-chi as the Non-Key elements were able to hound the Clannad Forces at almost every turn. However the Defensive Forces under Misuzu were unable to overwhelm the Starfish Platforms, and forced to fall back. This was a minor problem and actually expected, since it would keep the Starfish Platforms out of position. The Game turned however when Nagisa the Bold came up with a plan to use Kotomi's sonic attacks...through direct contact with the enemy hulls. Such a random tactic to practically ram the Non-Key forces caught Kagamin off guard and with the turn in the battle, St. Nagato-chi's Forces could not handle the combined firepower of the Clannad Republic Fleet.

With such a bold tactic, Nagisa's Dango Fleet with Intelligence Officer Ichinose's Force would make the attack too costly for St. Nagato-chi's forces and thus the defenses held. While losing did seem to put Kagamin out a bit, the defenses of the Clannad Republic reaffirmed St. Nagato-chi's prediction that the KyoAni Empire can defend itself quite well even against a determined invasion force.

Meanwhile on the front lines:
The Balsamic Fleet under Tsukasa was repulsed in her invasion of the HnG Combine by President Hinagiku's personal forces.

Horo Enterprises, in an attempt to file a grievance with the KyoAni Empire over the capture of the Spice Amu, would engage in a round of corporate negotiations on the Trade World of Izumi. Using the Empire's might as a tool, the Legendary Girl A, was able to remind Horo Enterprises that they operate only because it amuses the God Empress. Horo Enterprises representative returned home without a better contract (and her tail between her legs).

President Tomoyo would repulse an attack from the Kingdom of Night's Red Mage. The bold attack against the KyoAni Empire by the Kingdom of Night was beginning to worry the President. Just what did they want?

Key Advisor Kyou would engage the Kugimiya Master Nagi is open combat...not something one does lightly. Kyou however appear to be a master with speed and projectile weaponry as was able to engage the Knight outside of a swords reach for much of the engagement. After beating the Knight down, Kyou was able to close in rapidly to deliver a devastating kick to Master Nagi, forcing the Kugimiya Master to retreat from the battle. Despite this. KyoAni forces were unable to capitalize on this victory thank to the efforts of President Hinagiku against the Balsamic Fleet.

The Loli Warriors of Mei would be sent to the Outer Rim to claim worlds for the God Empress Haruhi. Choosing the Brave Blade World of Kirino, the loli power overwhelmed all resistances in a matter of hours.

The Moe Marines of Mikuru were dispatched to locate the base of operations for the Assassins of Shiki. While they were unable to locate the Hollow Planet of the Night, they did successfully engage several forces from that world and defeated them.

The God Empress Haruhi would take own personal Battle Fleet into the Geass Regency to engage the Witch-Regent's Forces. While the battle was intense, the God Empress was able to overcome the chess-like tactics of the Regent and devastate part of the Regency's Fleet.

However, Haruhi's flanking attack, under the control of the People's of Makoto, was unable to overcome the defenses of the Royal Guards under Commander Kallen, though the fight was intense to the point were both forces were spent in the action.

The Sickly World of Shior was engulfed by the Nebula of the Golden Darkness. The situation on the world has worsened greatly.

The Seeker's of the Sacred Uguu~ wondered into Rozen Space on their search. The Maidens did not take kindly to this action, thinking the ship Ayu was on a mission to steal power sources from the Maidens. The Red World of Shinku drove the Ayu off.

The Daemon Hunters of Mai would head for the ancient world of Persocom to take delivery of a new tactical unit, the U1 Model.

The Stormtroopers of Nayuki would be intercepted by the Time-Space Administration Bureau's Commander Hayate. While the fighting was fierce, since the escorts of for the Stormtrooper's transports were not up to the massive area of effect weaponry used by the Mistress of the Darkness, the unplanned boarding action against Hayate's flagship turned the tide of the action and forced the Mistress of the Darkness to retreat.

The Gentle Peoples of Sayuri were able to keep the Black Magician, Marisa, from stealing anything while she rested on their world. As time passes, the Touhou become more accustomed to life in this Galaxy.


Protector Reimu would like things to be quieter. After the successful attack on the World of Knowledge, Reimu attempted to intercept the forces of the Legendary Maria of the HnG Combine. But even without the aid of the Kugimiya Knights, Maria was able to best the Poor Shine Maiden's powers.

The World of Knowledge was yet again under the assault from the JCS. This time under the command of Techno Commander Mikasa. With the world's defenses pretty much shattered by previous attacks, the World of Knowledge was unable to mount much of a fight.

The Scarlet Vampire however was able to stop another incursion by the TSAB. This time the Red Knight of Darkness, Vita, would attempt to contain the Touhou. And while the Red Knight fought valiantly, the Remilia was able to repel this intrusion into her space.

Aya's Fast Recon group was able to make a quick pass need the Herald's of Azumanga. She hoped her pictures will give the Gensokyo Expeditionary Force a way to get around the JCS.


The JCS:

The Shining Blue Dragons of Ami would head out beyond Touhou Space to set up a potential base of operations. These forces were engaged the the remains of the Negima Empire, but the weakened force was unable to stand against the might of the Dragons.

The Diet Warriors of the Red Dragons would head to Kannagi Space due to a reading on their Kawaii Sensors. Once there, the Dragons would have to fend of the local defense forces on order to find the source of the disturbance. Once presented with the Nagi, the Diet Warriors were appeased and returned to their own territory.

Techo-Magi Commander Index would take her forces to the Outer Rim to "liberate" the World of Aquamarine from the Kingdom of the Night. The "liberation" was successful, but the locals are unsure about what that means for them.

The Kugimiya Knights:

Master Shana would get herself involved in an intense debate with the White Devil, Nanoha, herself. The veteran of countless wars, the White Devil was unsure Master Shana was maintaining the balance as requested. The intense debate almost resulted in another "befriending" incident, but Master Shana defused the situation before the White Devil brought out her "devilish tools".

Kugimiya Knight Louise of the Void would enter the Geass Regency Space on a fact finding mission. While the Regency was heavily engaged with the KyoAni Empire on one front, the Kugimiya Knights wanted to find out why the Regent had opened up a second front with the JCS. The Loyal Retainers of Anya would block the Knight's access to the Regent. A quick fight later and Louise of the Void would again be on her way.

Padawans sometimes engage in duels to increase their skills. Taiga and Yuuhi are no exceptions. Taiga's experience however has clearly made the duel very one sided. Yuuhi did not stand a chance against this highly skilled Padawan.


Commander Fate was attacked by the Garden World of Suiseiseki. The reasoning in not quite clear. Something about "putting one back in her place (desu~)". Fate, not having time to deal with these problems while focused on the Touhou and the KyoAni Empire, quickly defeated the Maiden of Rozen. "This isn't over (desu~)". was all the Maiden had to say as she sulked back towards her home system.


The Collector for Oyashiro-sama would press into Rozen Space. To the Dark Sister Wold of Suigintou. There she would look for a treasure. And while Suigintou resisted, "Junk", to the Collector, is one of the greatest treasure's in the Galaxy. Rena was happy.

The World of Rika-chama would send a force to visit the First One. While one of the chosen ones...the Cult of Oyashiro-sama wished for the blessing of the First One to continue onwards. And while Sakura was not one to hand out blessing easily...the cry of "nii-pah" was enough for the First One. The blessing was granted.

Meanwhile, Hanyuu would go to the Red Queen of the Brave Blade World for more worshipers. Strangely, the Brave Blades seemed to worship her already, and thus was granted many more followers.


The Kingdom of the Night's Sovereign of the Realm, Saber, would be forced to deal with an insurrection of some of their Loli Clone Forces. These Illya Clones wanted more from the kingdom than the kingdom was willing to grant. But Saber herself needed to deal with the clones, putting them down personally and effectively.


The Alice's World would be contracted to run supplies to and from the World of Shugo Chara, which was quite an honor for ARIA Corporation. The Spice must flow...but one can make a profit while allowing it to flow.
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby chaosprophet » Mon Mar 30, 2009 10:39 pm

At each time you posts it looks more like a story (And good luck to you... there are 57 more to go :P).

I believe it should be:

"Commander Fate would be attacked by the Garden World of Suiseiseki..."

"The Kingdom of the Night's Sovereign of the Realm, Saber, would be forced to..."

Wasn't it supposed to be Kugimiya Knights instead of Kagimiya Knights?
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby ithekro » Mon Mar 30, 2009 11:08 pm

I'm not sure why it keeps changing each time I type it? Must have been thinking too much about the Kagami vs Nagisa fight that I kept wanting to type Kagamiya Knight...remembered that the middle "a" was suppose to be an "i" but not remember that the first one was suppose to be a "u".

The whole War Game thing was because at first I couldn't think up a way for Nagisa to win. Kotomi was difficult as well, but that could have been pulled off like the previous yerar's fight of Key vs Non-Key Intelligence Officers for the God Empress' favor. Nagisa beating Kagami was unexpected, though not outside reason (like Ayu and Mai besting Yuki when they did last year). This time it was in the realm of possibility give the number Nagisa was able to generate before the match, and that Kagami did generate close to her normal numbers again. So since both fights were close, their all on the same team (so to speak), and the (three) winners were all from Clannad...a War Games with the Clannad Republic and everyone else made the most sense.
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby chaosprophet » Mon Mar 30, 2009 11:31 pm

Kagamiya Knights... when Kagami as a fellow tsundere take over the Kinghts to create an evil order controled by the Empire... :P
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby CrowKenobi » Tue Mar 31, 2009 6:28 am

Spoiler for Suggested fixes for Moe Chronicles of Aquamarine, Vol. 6:
ithekro wrote:Dawn of War: (Aquamarine 6)

Even in war one must stay at the top of one's game. The KyoAni Empire is no exception. Thus it was decided that the Empire should hold a cross faction War Games to hone the skills of the Fleets. St. Nagato-chi tasked the Clannad Republic to perform a defensive action against multiple allied forces to simulate attack from multiple nations against the KyoAni Empire. Key Intelligence Officer Ichinose was assigned to plan the defense. Nagisa the Bold would be overall fleet commander for the defense while to change up things, the Starfish Warrior of Fuuko would provide their large platforms for a defensive role over their normal attack role.

St. Nagato's plan was to send her own forces along with the Hiiragi Fleet under the Legendary Kagami in to directly engage the Clannad Force. Key Border World of Misuzu's Forces would, in a reversal of roles, attempt to attack the Starfish Platforms with their defense forces.

The Battle seemed to be going well for St. Nagato-chi as the Non-Key elements were able to hound the Clannad Forces at almost every turn. However the Defensive Forces under Misuzu were unable to overwhelm the Starfish Platforms, and forced to fall back. This was a minor problem and actually expected, since it would keep the Starfish Platforms out of position. The Game turned however when Nagisa the Bold came up with a plan to use Kotomi's sonic attacks...through direct contact with the enemy hulls. Such a random tactic to practically ram the Non-Key forces caught Kagamin off guard and with the turn in the battle, St. Nagato-chi's Forces could not handle the combined firepower of the Clannad Republic Fleet.

With such a bold tactic, Nagisa's Dango Fleet with Intelligence Officer Ichinose's Force would make the attack too costly for St. Nagato-chi's forces and thus the defenses held. While losing did seem to put Kagamin out a bit, the defenses of the Clannad Republic reaffirmed St. Nagato-chi's prediction that the KyoAni Empire can defend itself quite well even against a determined invasion force.

Meanwhile on the front lines:
The Balsamic Fleet under Tsukasa was repulsed in her invasion of the HnG Combine by President Hinagiku's personal forces.

Horo Enterprises, in an attempt to file a grievance with the KyoAni Empire over the capture of the Spice Amu, would engage in a round of corporate negotiations on the Trade World of Izumi. Using the Empire's might as a tool, the Legendary Girl A, was able to remind Horo Enterprises that they operate only because it amuses the God Empress. Horo Enterprises representative returned home without a better contract (and her tail between her legs).

President Tomoyo would repulse an attack from the Kingdom of Night's Red Mage. The bold attack against the KyoAni Empire by the Kingdom of Night was beginning to worry the President. Just what did they want?

Key Advisor Kyou would engage the Kugimiya Master Nagi is open combat...not something one does lightly. Kyou however appear to be a master with speed and projectile weaponry as was able to engage the Knight outside of a swords reach for much of the engagement. After beating the Knight down, Kyou was able to close in rapidly to deliver a devastating kick to Master Nagi, forcing the Kugimiya Master to retreat from the battle. Despite this. KyoAni forces were unable to capitalize on this victory thank to the efforts of President Hinagiku against the Balsamic Fleet.

The Loli Warriors of Mei would be sent to the Outer Rim to claim worlds for the God Empress Haruhi. Choosing the Brave Blade World of Kirino, the loli power overwhelmed all resistances in a matter of hours.

The Moe Marines of Mikuru were dispatched to locate the base of operations for the Assassins of Shiki. While they were unable to locate the Hollow Planet of the Night, they did successfully engage several forces from that world and defeated them.

The God Empress Haruhi would take own personal Battle Fleet into the Geass Regency to engage the Witch-Regent's Forces. While the battle was intense, the God Empress was able to overcome the chess-like tactics of the Regent and devastate part of the Regency's Fleet.

However, Haruhi's flanking attack, under the control of the People's of Makoto, was unable to overcome the defenses of the Royal Guards under Commander Kallen, though the fight was intense to the point were both forces were spent in the action.

The Sickly World of Shior was engulfed by the Nebula of the Golden Darkness. The situation on the world has worsened greatly.

The Seeker's of the Sacred Uguu~ wondered into Rozen Space on their search. The Maidens did not take kindly to this action, thinking the ship Ayu was on a mission to steal power sources from the Maidens. The Red World of Shinku drove the Ayu off.

The Daemon Hunters of Mai would head for the ancient world of Persocom to take delivery of a new tactical unit, the U1 Model.

The Stormtroopers of Nayuki would be intercepted by the Time-Space Administration Bureau's Commander Hayate. While the fighting was fierce, since the escorts of for the Stormtrooper's transports were not up to the massive area of effect weaponry used by the Mistress of the Darkness, the unplanned boarding action against Hayate's flagship turned the tide of the action and forced the Mistress of the Darkness to retreat.

The Gentle Peoples of Sayuri were able to keep the Black Magician, Marisa, from stealing anything while she rested on their world. As time passes, the Touhou become more accustomed to life in this Galaxy.


Protector Reimu would like things to be quieter. After the successful attack on the World of Knowledge, Reimu attempted to intercept the forces of the Legendary Maria of the HnG Combine. But even without the aid of the Kugimiya Knights, Maria was able to best the Poor Shine Maiden's powers.

The World of Knowledge was yet again under the assault from the JCS. This time under the command of Techno Commander Mikasa. With the world's defenses pretty much shattered by previous attacks, the World of Knowledge was unable to mount much of a fight.

The Scarlet Vampire however was able to stop another incursion by the TSAB. This time the Red Knight of Darkness, Vita, would attempt to contain the Touhou. And while the Red Knight fought valiantly, the Remilia was able to repel this intrusion into her space.

Aya's Fast Recon group was able to make a quick pass need the Herald's of Azumanga. She hoped her pictures will give the Gensokyo Expeditionary Force a way to get around the JCS.


The JCS:

The Shining Blue Dragons of Ami would head out beyond Touhou Space to set up a potential base of operations. These forces were engaged the the remains of the Negima Empire, but the weakened force was unable to stand against the might of the Dragons.

The Diet Warriors of the Red Dragons would head to Kannagi Space due to a reading on their Kawaii Sensors. Once there, the Dragons would have to fend of the local defense forces on order to find the source of the disturbance. Once presented with the Nagi, the Diet Warriors were appeased and returned to their own territory.

Techo-Magi Commander Index would take her forces to the Outer Rim to "liberate" the World of Aquamarine from the Kingdom of the Night. The "liberation" was successful, but the locals are unsure about what that means for them.

The Kugimiya Knights:

Master Shana would get herself involved in an intense debate with the White Devil, Nanoha, herself. The veteran of countless wars, the White Devil was unsure Master Shana was maintaining the balance as requested. The intense debate almost resulted in another "befriending" incident, but Master Shana defused the situation before the White Devil brought out her "devilish tools".

Kugimiya Knight Louise of the Void would enter the Geass Regency Space on a fact finding mission. While the Regency was heavily engaged with the KyoAni Empire on one front, the Kugimiya Knights wanted to find out why the Regent had opened up a second front with the JCS. The Loyal Retainers of Anya would block the Knight's access to the Regent. A quick fight later and Louise of the Void would again be on her way.

Padawans sometimes engage in duels to increase their skills. Taiga and Yuuhi are no exceptions. Taiga's experience however has clearly made the duel very one sided. Yuuhi did not stand a chance against this highly skilled Padawan.


Commander Fate was attacked by the Garden World of Suiseiseki. The reasoning in not quite clear. Something about "putting one back in her place (desu~)". Fate, not having time to deal with these problems while focused on the Touhou and the KyoAni Empire, quickly defeated the Maiden of Rozen. "This isn't over (desu~)". was all the Maiden had to say as she sulked back towards her home system.


The Collector for Oyashiro-sama would press into Rozen Space. To the Dark Sister Wold of Suigintou. There she would look for a treasure. And while Suigintou resisted, "Junk", to the Collector, is one of the greatest treasure's in the Galaxy. Rena was happy.

The World of Rika-chama would send a force to visit the First One. While one of the chosen ones...the Cult of Oyashiro-sama wished for the blessing of the First One to continue onwards. And while Sakura was not one to hand out blessing easily...the cry of "nii-pah" was enough for the First One. The blessing was granted.

Meanwhile, Hanyuu would go to the Red Queen of the Brave Blade World for more worshipers. Strangely, the Brave Blades seemed to worship her already, and thus was granted many more followers.


The Kingdom of the Night's Sovereign of the Realm, Saber, would be forced to deal with an insurrection of some of their Loli Clone Forces. These Illya Clones wanted more from the kingdom than the kingdom was willing to grant. But Saber herself needed to deal with the clones, putting them down personally and effectively.


The Alice's World would be contracted to run supplies to and from the World of Shugo Chara, which was quite an honor for ARIA Corporation. The Spice must flow...but one can make a profit while allowing it to flow.
Nice job! The storyline gets more interesting as we go along... :D
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby ithekro » Wed Apr 01, 2009 3:31 am

Dawn of War: (Aquamarine 7)

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Even in times of war there can be corruption and illegal dealings. After numerous incidents, Intelligence Officers St. Nagato-chi and Ichinose conduct an investigation under the orders of Key Advisor Kyou, and escorted by the Hiiragi Fleet under Kagamin, into the activities of the vessel Ayu. The Seekers of the Sacred Uguu~ have gathered a number of supporters to their cause. Among these are elements of both the Daemon Hunters of Mai, the Stormtroopers of Nayuki, and the Moe Marines of Mikuru.

With such highly trained soldiers under the sway of the Seekers, the investigation team had to resort to various means to gain access to the Ayu. Fleet Command under Kagamin was able to get the Moe Marines to stand down by order of the God Empress, but not without some heavy skirmishes and casualties. Kyou and Kotomi were able to convince the Kanon Protectorate Forces to stand down through use of the chain of command via the authority of President Tomoyo and the God Empress Haruhi. Casualties were fewer among the Key Forces.

These actions allowed St. Nagato-chi access to the Ayu. The Seekers of the Sacred Uguu~ did not take the intrusion well and resisted. Despite this, St, Nagato-chi was able to find proof of the Ayu's smuggling activities and arrested some of the Seeker's members. An impound of the Ayu has been scheduled, but the God Empress may decide on a different fate for the vessel and the Seekers of the Sacred Uguu~.

The Loli Warriors of Mei would followup on the God Empress' assault on the Geass Regency and flank the Royal Guard under Kallen. The superior firepower of the newer combat units from Mei were able to penetrate the defenses much easier than the People's of Makoto's attacks previously.

President Tomoyo would investigate the Nebula of the Golden Darkness in an effort to remove its deadly grasp on the Sickly World of Shiori. It is possible her efforts may allow for researchers to move the nebula, as it somehow drifted into this region of space.

An assassination attempt on the God Empress! Assassins of Shiki, in retribution for the KyoAni Empire's attempt to locate their world, put a contract out for Haruhi. However the skilled personnel around the God Empress managed to eliminate the threat to her being.

The Red Mage of the Kingdom of Night returned to Clannad Space and attacked Fuuko while the fleet was away. The sneak attack destroyed several vessels under construction, but was finally pushed back by the returning Starfish Platforms. What the Kingdom of Night is doing provoking the KyoAni Empire is yet unknown.

Nagisa the Bold, her Dango Fleet in high spirits, would go to the Blade World of Kirino to spread the word of the God Empress. Her new found reputation proceeding her, the local defense fleet did not put forth any noted resistance.

The Balsamic Fleet under Tsukasa would intercept a group of followers of the Cult of Oyashiro-sama heading from the World of Hanyuu to KyoAni Space. Their subversive behavior has been known to cause moral problems in the Empire and the vessels were asked to turn back. The more fanatical followers declared the situation was "L5" and opened fire on the Balsamic Fleet. Caught offguard, Commander Tsukasa was only barely able to pull her forces together and eventually neutralize the Cult operated vessels.

A combined assault on JCS and TSAB territories would result in a hyperspace incident as the fleet transporting the People's of Makoto would go off course and end up in the space of the First One. The First One, Sakura, did not care for the armed intrusion of her territory and drove the KyoAni Fleet from her systems.

The rest of the combined assault, without the aid of the Peoples of Makoto, would not fair as well against enemy forces.
While the Border World of Misuzu's Fleet was able to hold back the forces of the Red Knight Vita, the assault on the White Devil by the forces from Sayuri were doomed to fail without the main force from Makoto.

The second part of the combined assault was the Fleet from Izumi supported by a force from Shiori. This force would strike at the Dragon Dominion. While the Forces of Izumi would strike deep into the Diet Warrior's egos, the force from Shiori was unable to handle the Shiny Blue Dragons of Ami. The God Empress may pull back this offensive do to its stalled nature.


The rest of the TSAB was under attack from outside forces. The Kingdom of Night would challenge the TSAB directly. Saber would duel Fate for the right to more core systems. The duel was fairly intense, but in the end, Fate would prevail over the Kingdom of Night. Saber would return home, her first campaign for the inner core had ended.

Mistress of the Night, Hayate, would be pressed by the Maidens of Rozen. The Red World of Shinku would strike and succeed where the Garden World of Suiseiseki had failed. The Rozens victory would keep their power strong while dividing the TSAB territory.


Techno-magi Commander Index, while attempting to get supplies to the front lines, was intercepted by the Loli Clones of Illya. Not expecting a fight so soon, the Techn-Magi force was overwhelmed and defeated by the Kingdom of Night.

Techno Commander Mikasa would be sent to deal with the Touhou and engaged Protector Reimu's forces near the border. The heavier firepower of the Techno-Magi Fleet was enough to force Reimu to retreat.

The Heralds of Azumanga, put in the rear of all JCS space, where again assaulted by Geass forces. This time is was the Loyal Retainers of Anya attempting to make an opening for the Regency forces to slip into later in the war. The old "Osaka" Platforms seem to be obsolete in modern warfare. Rumors of an upgrade by JCS engineers is still unconfirmed.


The Kugimiya Knights:
Master Shana was called to settle a dispute between the JCS and the Dark Evangel over her banishment in the last war. While the Negima Empire has indeed fought against both major sides during the middle of the conflict, the banishment beyond Great Void seems like an unfitting punishment to the last survivor's world. Shana, having witnessed the victory of the Setsuna during the Topaz Campaign, was not moved by the Dark Evangel. The Banishment stands.

Master Nagi would return home for a time due to some news about one of their main production lines...the Hayate type Combat Butlers. HnG Combine wanted to place them into full production, but Maria was unsure if that was a viable option as its various abilities were not all together tested. Master Nagi on the other hand, wanted the Hayate type to be a limited run series so that it would drive the price up and yet make the rumors of its abilities for more deadly that it actually is. Maria and the board settled on the Master's plan

Kugimiya Knight Louise of the Void would be hunted by soldiers from the Garden World of Suiseiseki. The reasoning is unclear. Perhaps the Rozen decided to heal her bruised ego by striking a less powerful target? The Knight was ambushed by a small rectangular flying object that hit her in the back of the head at high speed. The attack was short, followed by a laugh and an overly dramatic speech about "chibi humans (desu~)" and a hasty retreat before the Knight woke up.

Padawan Taiga confronts Horo Enterprises about their business practices in JCS territory. The representative from Horo Enterprises, knowing full well they are barely holding the neutral line between all forces, gives into the Kugimiya Knight's request.

Padawan Yuuhi would head into Touhou space to capture the Black Magicia Marisa. While the Knight was unable to capture the Marisa, she did prevent her from making another effort on to JCS territory.


Suigintou of the Dark Sister World would head across the Core to prevent farther advances of the Touhou. However the Scarlet Vampire Remilia took to the Dark Maiden of Rozen very quickly which surprised Suigintou. Remilia surrendered to the Maiden when asked, but then said something about missing her Sakuya before being lead away from the core by the Maiden of Rozen.


President Hinagiku of the HnG Combine would head to Aquamarine for a much needed vacation. The service was more than what she expected and perhaps, for once, she will get to relax away from business and war.


The World of Rika-chama would decisively stop a recon attempt by the Gensokyo Expeditionary Force under Aya. No pictures of the defenses would leave Rika-chama.

The Collector for Oyashiro-sama would head deep into Touhou Space to add to her collection. First she would travel to the World of Knowledge to take Patchouli home. The capture was successful.


The Red Queen Tamaki would prevent another religious invasion. This time from the Kannagi. Misfortune follows the Brave Blades on the Outer Rim as they continue to try to preserve their fragile culture.


The Chii of Persocom where able to secure rights for passage to Alice's World to explore...something she has not allowed herself to do in many years.


Witch-Regent C.C. would conduct an emergency raid for more of the Spice Amu after the devastating attack of the KyoAni Empire under the God Empress Haruhi. The renewed Spice supplies should maintain the economy until the attack can be met with similar force.
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby CrowKenobi » Wed Apr 01, 2009 4:55 am

Spoiler for Suggested fixes for Moe Chronicles of Aquamarine, Vol. 7:
ithekro wrote:Dawn of War: (Aquamarine 7)

Even in times of war there can be corruption and illegal dealings. After numerous incidents, Intelligence Officers St. Nagato-chi and Ichinose conduct an investigation under the orders of Key Advisor Kyou, and escorted by the Hiiragi Fleet under Kagamin, into the activities of the vessel Ayu. The Seekers of the Sacred Uguu~ have gathered a number of supporters to their cause. Among these are elements of both the Daemon Hunters of Mai, the Stormtroopers of Nayuki, and the Moe Marines of Mikuru.

With such highly trained soldiers under the sway of the Seekers, the investigation team had to resort to various means to gain access to the Ayu. Fleet Command under Kagamin was able to get the Moe Marines to stand down by order of the God Empress, but not without some heavy skirmishes and casualties. Kyou and Kotomi were able to convince the Kanon Protectorate Forces to stand down through use of the chain of command via the authority of President Tomoyo and the God Empress Haruhi. Casualties were fewer among the Key Forces.

These actions allowed St. Nagato-chi access to the Ayu. The Seekers of the Sacred Uguu~ did not take the intrusion well and resisted. Despite this, St, Nagato-chi was able to find proof of the Ayu's smuggling activities and arrested some of the Seeker's members. An impound of the Ayu has been scheduled, but the God Empress may decide on a different fate for the vessel and the Seekers of the Sacred Uguu~.

The Loli Warriors of Mei would followup on the God Empress' assault on the Geass Regency and flank the Royal Guard under Kallen. The superior firepower of the newer combat units from Mei were able to penetrate the defenses much easier than the People's of Makoto's attacks previously.

President Tomoyo would investigate the Nebula of the Golden Darkness in an effort to remove its deadly grasp on the Sickly World of Shiori. It is possible her efforts may allow for researchers to move the nebula, as it somehow drifted into this region of space.

An assassination attempt on the God Empress! Assassins of Shiki, in retribution for the KyoAni Empire's attempt to locate their world, put a contract out for Haruhi. However the skilled personnel around the God Empress managed to eliminate the threat to her being.

The Red Mage of the Kingdom of Night returned to Clannad Space and attacked Fuuko while the fleet was away. The sneak attack destroyed several vessels under construction, but was finally pushed back by the returning Starfish Platforms. What the Kingdom of Night is doing provoking the KyoAni Empire is yet unknown.

Nagisa the Bold, her Dango Fleet in high spirits, would go to the Blade World of Kirino to spread the word of the God Empress. Her new found reputation proceeding her, the local defense fleet did not put forth any noted resistance.

The Balsamic Fleet under Tsukasa would intercept a group of followers of the Cult of Oyashiro-sama heading from the World of Hanyuu to KyoAni Space. Their subversive behavior has been known to cause moral problems in the Empire and the vessels were asked to turn back. The more fanatical followers declared the situation was "L5" and opened fire on the Balsamic Fleet. Caught offguard, Commander Tsukasa was only barely able to pull her forces together and eventually neutralize the Cult operated vessels.

A combined assault on JCS and TSAB territories would result in a hyperspace incident as the fleet transporting the People's of Makoto would go off course and end up in the space of the First One. The First One, Sakura, did not care for the armed intrusion of her territory and drove the KyoAni Fleet from her systems.

The rest of the combined assault, without the aid of the Peoples of Makoto, would not fair as well against enemy forces.
While the Border World of Misuzu's Fleet was able to hold back the forces of the Red Knight Vita, the assault on the White Devil by the forces from Sayuri were doomed to fail without the main force from Makoto.

The second part of the combined assault was the Fleet from Izumi supported by a force from Shiori. This force would strike at the Dragon Dominion. While the Forces of Izumi would strike deep into the Diet Warrior's egos, the force from Shiori was unable to handle the Shiny Blue Dragons of Ami. The God Empress may pull back this offensive do to its stalled nature.


The rest of the TSAB was under attack from outside forces. The Kingdom of Night would challenge the TSAB directly. Saber would duel Fate for the right to more core systems. The duel was fairly intense, but in the end, Fate would prevail over the Kingdom of Night. Saber would return home, her first campaign for the inner core had ended.

Mistress of the Night, Hayate, would be pressed by the Maidens of Rozen. The Red World of Shinku would strike and succeed where the Garden World of Suiseiseki had failed. The Rozens victory would keep their power strong while dividing the TSAB territory.


Techno-magi Commander Index, while attempting to get supplies to the front lines, was intercepted by the Loli Clones of Illya. Not expecting a fight so soon, the Techn-Magi force was overwhelmed and defeated by the Kingdom of Night.

Techno Commander Mikasa would be sent to deal with the Touhou and engaged Protector Reimu's forces near the border. The heavier firepower of the Techno-Magi Fleet was enough to force Reimu to retreat.

The Heralds of Azumanga, put in the rear of all JCS space, where again assaulted by Geass forces. This time is was the Loyal Retainers of Anya attempting to make an opening for the Regency forces to slip into later in the war. The old "Osaka" Platforms seem to be obsolete in modern warfare. Rumors of an upgrade by JCS engineers is still unconfirmed.


The Kugimiya Knights:
Master Shana was called to settle a dispute between the JCS and the Dark Evangel over her banishment in the last war. While the Negima Empire has indeed fought against both major sides during the middle of the conflict, the banishment beyond Great Void seems like an unfitting punishment to the last survivor's world. Shana, having witnessed the victory of the Setsuna during the Topaz Campaign, was not moved by the Dark Evangel. The Banishment stands.

Master Nagi would return home for a time due to some news about one of their main production lines...the Hayate type Combat Butlers. HnG Combine wanted to place them into full production, but Maria was unsure if that was a viable option as its various abilities were not all together tested. Master Nagi on the other hand, wanted the Hayate type to be a limited run series so that it would drive the price up and yet make the rumors of its abilities for more deadly that it actually is. Maria and the board settled on the Master's plan

Kugimiya Knight Louise of the Void would be hunted by soldiers from the Garden World of Suiseiseki. The reasoning is unclear. Perhaps the Rozen decided to heal her bruised ego by striking a less powerful target? The Knight was ambushed by a small rectangular flying object that hit her in the back of the head at high speed. The attack was short, followed by a laugh and an overly dramatic speech about "chibi humans (desu~)" and a hasty retreat before the Knight woke up.

Padawan Taiga confronts Horo Enterprises about their business practices in JCS territory. The representative from Horo Enterprises, knowing full well they are barely holding the neutral line between all forces, gives into the Kugimiya Knight's request.

Padawan Yuuhi would head into Touhou space to capture the Black Magicia Marisa. While the Knight was unable to capture the Marisa, she did prevent her from making another effort on to JCS territory.


Suigintou of the Dark Sister World would head across the Core to prevent farther advances of the Touhou. However the Scarlet Vampire Remilia took to the Dark Maiden of Rozen very quickly which surprised Suigintou. Remilia surrendered to the Maiden when asked, but then said something about missing her Sakuya before being lead away from the core by the Maiden of Rozen.


President Hinagiku of the HnG Combine would head to Aquamarine for a much needed vacation. The service was more than what she expected and perhaps, for once, she will get to relax away from business and war.


The World of Rika-chama would decisively stop a recon attempt by the Gensokyo Expeditionary Force under Aya. No pictures of the defenses would leave Rika-chama.

The Collector for Oyashiro-sama would head deep into Touhou Space to add to her collection. First she would travel to the World of Knowledge to take Patchouli home. The capture was successful.


The Red Queen Tamaki would prevent another religious invasion. This time from the Kannagi. Misfortune follows the Brave Blades on the Outer Rim as they continue to try to preserve their fragile culture.


The Chii of Persocom where able to secure rights for passage to Alice's World to explore...something she has not allowed herself to do in many years.


Witch-Regent C.C. would conduct an emergency raid for more of the Spice Amu after the devastating attack of the KyoAni Empire under the God Empress Haruhi. The renewed Spice supplies should maintain the economy until the attack can be met with similar force.
Another good after-action report! :D

:lol: at Louise getting ambushed!
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby ithekro » Wed Apr 01, 2009 6:21 am

I don't know why, but I decided to try to make actions with Suiseiseki has silly as realistically possible. I typed that ambush out, then started cracking up as I made correction and finished her quoted section (at first is was just (desu~), but it needed the rant for it to fit right.)
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby melange » Wed Apr 01, 2009 6:53 am

ithekro wrote:I don't know why, but I decided to try to make actions with Suiseiseki has silly as realistically possible. I typed that ambush out, then started cracking up as I made correction and finished her quoted section (at first is was just (desu~), but it needed the rant for it to fit right.)

Its a stroke of genius :lol:
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby ithekro » Fri Apr 03, 2009 12:17 am

Dawn of War: (Aquamarine 7.5)


Beyond the Outer Rim. In the Cross Gudgeon Cluster.

Deep Space exploratory forces of multiple galactic powers were sent out after the Great War. Some of those that fought would be sent out to find new resources and worlds to colonize, or new races to ally with and/or exploit, depending on the faction involved.

Out in the Cross Gudgeon Cluster, located below the galactic plane, a small task force from the KyoAni Empire would set about expanding the God Empress' domain. Under the command of Intelligence Officer Miyuki, this force would encounter several native species as well as rivals from their home galaxy.

Miyuki's Force (escorted by the Key Forces represented by the Clannad Republic's Tomoya and Yuuhei) encountered a unit from the pre-war DEEN Directorate, which collapsed at the start of the Great Moe War. The E-Fleet under Chinami was unable to handle the direct missile fire of Miyuki's force even with their superior ECM systems.

Tomoya and Yuuhei's force commanders would argue over who should go forward and who should stay behind to guard Miyuki's force. Tomoya's force proved to be heavier, and thus was left to cover the lighter Miyuki squadron while Yuuhei's Force was send ahead to explore.

Yuuhei's Squadron discovered a world similar to the planet Shugo Chara, home of the Spice Amu. Hoping to stake a claim for the God Empress, the Key Force failed to notice other forces in the area.

A force of original model Hayate combat butlers from the HnG Combine were engaged in direct combat with the native Watarase, but were also engaged in a general war with other galactic forces. A former satellite of the Nagima Empire under the Shaft Treaty would engage in the melee under command of the tyrant Mariya. Also involved was a minion from the world of Chiaki-hime, the ever ready Mako-chan Elites. Also engaged in the action was another member of the fallen DEEN Directorate, and member of the Cult of Oyashiro-sama, the Elusive Satoshi.


KyoAni Forces under Yuuhei were turned away from the mass engagement, hoping to be able to bring to bare their full fighting force at a later date. HnG Combine forces under the first Hayate model were able to defeat both the native Watarase and the other galactic powers trying to claim the world that looked like Shugo Chara. However it turned out to be a trap laid down by another local power, the Hamaji. Using a false spice knows as Fujisaki, they had hoped to lure other races there to collect slaves. However the Hayate models were able to defeat the Hamaji and got word out about the false spice.

KyoAni Intelligence Officer Miyuki would thank the HnG Combine's Hayate model and decided against moving her forces in that particular direction. Regrouping with the Tomoya and Yuuhei squadrons, she would continue in a different direction to spread the domain of the God Empress Haruhi.
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby CrowKenobi » Fri Apr 03, 2009 4:04 am

Spoiler for suggested fixes for The Moe Chronicles of Aquamarine, Vol. 7, chpt 30-37:
ithekro wrote:Dawn of War: (Aquamarine 7.5)


Beyond the Outer Rim. In the Cross Gudgeon Cluster.

Deep Space exploratory forces of multiple galactic powers were sent out after the Great War. Some of those that fought would be sent out to find new resources and worlds to colonize, or new races to ally with and/or exploit, depending on the faction involved.

Out in the Cross Gudgeon Cluster, located below the galactic plane, a small task force from the KyoAni Empire would set about expanding the God Empress' domain. Under the command of Intelligence Officer Miyuki, this force would encounter several native species as well as rivals from their home galaxy.

Miyuki's Force (escorted by the Key Forces represented by the Clannad Republic's Tomoya and Yuuhei) encountered a unit from the pre-war DEEN Directorate, which collapsed at the start of the Great Moe War. The E-Fleet under Chinami was unable to handle the direct missile fire of Miyuki's force even with their superior ECM systems.

Tomoya and Yuuhei's force commanders would argue over who should go forward and who should stay behind to guard Miyuki's force. Tomoya's force proved to be heavier, and thus was left to cover the lighter Miyuki squadron while Yuuhei's Force was send ahead to explore.

Yuuhei's Squadron discovered a world similar to the planet Shugo Chara, home of the Spice Amu. Hoping to stake a claim for the God Empress, the Key Force failed to notice other forces in the area.

A force of original model Hayate combat butlers from the HnG Combine were engaged in direct combat with the native Watarase, but were also engaged in a general war with other galactic forces. A former satellite of the Nagima Empire under the Shaft Treaty would engage in the melee under command of the tyrant Mariya. Also involved was a minion from the world of Chiaki-hime, the ever ready Mako-chan Elites. Also engaged in the action was another member of the fallen DEEN Directorate, and member of the Cult of Oyashiro-sama, the Elusive Satoshi.


KyoAni Forces under Yuuhi were turned away from the mass engagement, hoping to be able to bring to bare their full fighting force at a later date. HnG Combine forces under the first Hayate model were able to defeat both the native Watarase and the other galactic powers trying to claim the world that looked like Shugo Chara. However it turned out to be a trap laid down by another local power, the Hamaji. Using a false spice knows as Fujisaki, they had hoped to lure other races there to collect slaves. However the Hayate models were able to defeat the Hamaji and got word out about the false space.

KyoAni Intelligence Officer Miyuki would thank the HnG Combine's Hayate model and decided against moving her forces in that particular direction. Regrouping with the Tomoya and Yuuhei squadrons, she would continue in a different direction to spread the domain of the God Empress Haruhi.
And thus, the first side battle of the Great Moe War begins... the only question remaining: Will there be more? ;)
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby chaosprophet » Fri Apr 03, 2009 4:43 am

That side battle was fun... maybe more side battles related with the other moe tournaments that characters can enter ISML... (like for example the result of the fight between the 16 better as it would opem way to how the new chars will be in the next battle (nomination/preliminar period could be an time of peace where planets reconstructed and all of that :P).

Now on this line: "KyoAni Forces under Yuuhi were turned away from the mass engagement..." shouldn't it be Yuuhei instead of Yuuhi?
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby ithekro » Fri Apr 03, 2009 8:29 am

Dawn of War: (Aquamarine 8)

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The balance of power had shifted once again. The KyoAni Empire had consolidated its holding in the Core Worlds. The God Empires Haruhi would lead a massive invasion of the Outer Rim. Her target was to personally claim the world of Shugo Chara and the Spice Amu for her Empire. The world was in no way prepared or willing to put up a fight against the might of Haruhi's personal fleet. While Horo Enterprises would still have the right to ship the spice to all worlds...the KyoAni Empire was now in control of the Spice and would receive its cut of the profits.

Another invasion was made by the Legendary Girl A supported by the Moe Marines of Mikuru into the Brave Blade Worlds. The weakened power was unable to stop the KyoAni Empire and both the Red Queen Tamaki and the Brave World of Kirino were captured by KyoAni Forces.

In order to help the unguarded world of Shiori, the Starfish Platforms from Fuuko were positioned in the Nebula of the Golden Darkness and would use their weapons in an effort to clear the region of space around the Sickly World.

The Kugimiya Master Shana would also travel to the world of Shiori. While these might be the enemy, the pain the peoples of this world bore was more than the Master could stand. She too would attempt to find a way two move the Nebula of the Golden Darkness from the planet's skies.

Key Intelligence Officer Ichinose would venture to Alice's World for rest after many hard campaigns. It was a relatively peaceful visit and Kotomi was not bullied by any of the store owners into buying anything.

The Legendary Kagamin evaded an assassination attempt by the Assassins of Shiki today. The general boldness of the assassins has several powers worried where they might strike next and who is paying them.

The Balsamic Fleet under Commander Tsukasa would head to Kannagi Space to see if the will of the God Empress could be spread to the worshipers of Nagi. The worshipers are resistant and only some chance events saved Tsukasa's Force from being overrun. The vindication of the Empire was shown as the Balsamic Fleet warships annihilated the largest ship of the Kannagi fleet.

The Dark Evangel would seek rest on the World of Sayuri. While the Gentle People of that world would do their best, the last leader of the Negima found no rest there. She would move on within a day of her arrival.

The Maidens of Rozen would seek combat with the KyoAni Empire. The Dark Sister World of Suigintou would successfully engage the Key Border World of Misuzu's defenses while the Red World of Shinku would keep Key Advisor Kyou's main fleet busy a few sectors away. While Shinku's force was badly damaged in the action, Suigintou manged to accomplish her goals.

President Tomoyo would engage JCS Forces near the border. Her fighters were able to out match the Shining Blue Dragons of Ami.

The Stormtroopers of Nayuki would fail to penetrate the HnG Combine was Maria's Forces were able to intercept them long before they reached any of the Combine's planets. While Maria is confident in her Hayate-class combat butlers, it is much easier to destroy transports in deep space than trained soldiers on the ground.

The Seekers of the Sacred Uguu~ would attempt to break their ship, the Ayu, out of impound. The Daemon Hunters of Mai, placed as the main security force within the Kanon Protectorate, were on duty. While they were not able to stop the Seekers from escaping, the Ayu remains impounded.

The Loli Warriors of Mei, in an effort to extract the wayward Peoples of Makoto, sent their fleet to the realm of the First One. While they were able to extract the People of Makoto, it cost the Mei heavily. Their loli power was not enough against the loli powers of Sakura, the First One. The Mei were forced to retreat.

The Peoples of Makoto, while having escaped from the First One, ended up off course again (their navigation computer remained damaged) and ended up in Touhou space. While repairing their damaged systems they successfully repulsed a patrol from Aya and denied the Touhou from getting a clear shot at destroying a unit of the KyoAni Empire.

Nagisa the Bold would repulse a counterattack by the Geass Regency's Royal Guard. Kallen's forces, while clever, were not a match for the heavier Dango Fleet.

Intelligence Officer St. Nagato-chi would probe the Time-Space Administration Bureau for signs of intent. Her forces would encounter the Mistress of Darkness Hayate. While the engagement provided more data on TSAB tactics and its capabilities, St. Nagato-chi would still manage to gain the advantage via superior tactics and the ability to spread her forces over a greater area than even the Hayate could blast. The KyoAni Empire would have its data.


Meanwhile:
Fate would investigate Commander Index of the Techno-Magi. The TSAB was concerned over heavy loses to KyoAni Forces. The investigation when as smoothly as it possibly could.

The White Devil would seek out the Kugimiya Padawan Yuuhi to give her new military training. Nanoha's training methods however tend towards the violent side of things and when things get bad, a "befriending" is standard policy. Even a Kugimiya Knight in not immune to being "befriended" by the White Devil.

The Red Knight of Darkness, Vita, would attacked suddenly by the Red Mage of the Kingdom of Night. Rin's surprise attack left Vita will little power to return fire. The seemingly random attacks by the Kingdom of Night continue to perplex both the KyoAni Empire and those in the Tenuous Alliance.


Saber, ruler of the Kingdom of Night, would seek out and engage the Kugimiya Knight Louise of the Void. The sword play verses the mostly magical power of the Master of the Void were more than the Kugimiya Knight could handle.

Not all went well for the Kingdom of Knight. The Loli Clones of Illya where defeated by President Hinagiku of the HnG Combine, when they attempted to land forces her one of her worlds.


Kugimiya Master Nagi would get into a debate on tactics with Techno-Commander Mikasa. The debate on technological superiority verses faith in one's goals continued for some time before Nagi displayed her own powers to prove that technology does not always know the answers.

Kugimiya Padawan Taiga would be recalled by the Red Dragons to end a dispute over territorial and trading rights with one of their lesser worlds. The Padawan took in upon herself to direct all actions and rewrite the entire agreement, overriding the Red Dragons authority. The heavy handedness seemed overly harsh to the Red Dragons, but in the end they saw her wisdom...or perhaps made themselves feel better my justifying it as wisdom, no one is certain.


The Mysterious Hanyuu would spread word of Oyashiro-sama to the world of Aquamarine. The peaceful world appealed to Hanyuu and she stayed for a while.

Collector for Oyashiro-sama remained in Touhou Space. She had been watching during the first part of the war and noticed a pattern. Every time the World of Knowledge was attacked, Protector Reimu would arrive to attempt to defend it. So the Collector sat in wait for the Protector...for Oyashiro-sama would want a new miko to add to the collection. Rena was correct when the Poor Shrine Maiden arrived. After a brief but intense fight, the Collector would gain her prize, even commenting that the Protector's voice was cute yet familiar.

The World of Rika-chama would repel an attack by the Geass Regency. The Loyal Retainers of Anya would attempt to assault Rika-chama, but the defenses of that world are far more tricky than one would expect seeing it from the systems edge. Anya's force was forced to retreat after only a short exchange with the planetary defenses.


Witch-Regent C.C. would go to the world of Persocom to collect much needed replacement drones for her Regency. The drones would fill in gaps opened up after the many attack by the KyoAni Empire on her territories.


Horo Enterprises would send a trade mission into Touhou Space to retrieve a supply of Spice stolen by the Black Magician Marisa. While it was a long chase, the company was able to track down the Magician and retake the Spice.

The Scarlet Vampire, Remilia would travel to the World of Knowledge. Her friend Patchilou had been attacked so many times that the defenses were useless. With great difficultly, the Scarlet Vampire would attempt to restore some sort of defense systems to the ravaged World of Knowledge.


Meanwhile on the other side of Touhou Space, the "Osaka" platforms of the Herald of Azumanga would engage elements of the Garden World of Suiseiseki. The slower platforms were unable to handle the swift and smaller vessels of the Maiden of Rozen (desu~). The older platforms were routed by the Suiseiseki (desu~). "All glory to the Suiseiseki (desu~)." Where the Maiden of Rozen is heading is unclear.
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby CrowKenobi » Sat Apr 04, 2009 4:55 am

Spoiler for Suggested fixes for Moe Chronicles of Aquamarine, Vol. 8:
ithekro wrote:Dawn of War: (Aquamarine 8)

The balance of power had shifted once again. The KyoAni Empire had consolidated its holding in the Core Worlds. The God Empires Haruhi would lead a massive invasion of the Outer Rim. Her target was to personally claim the world of Shugo Chara and the Spice Amu for her Empire. The world was in no way prepared or willing to put up a fight against the might of Haruhi's personal fleet. While Horo Enterprises would still have the right to ship the spice to all worlds...the KyoAni Empire was now in control of the Spice and would receive its cut of the profits.

Another invasion was made by the Legendary Girl A supported by the Moe Marines of Mikuru into the Brave Blade Worlds. The weakened power was unable to stop the KyoAni Empire and both the Red Queen Tamaki and the Brave World of Kirino were captured by KyoAni Forces.

In order to help the unguarded world of Shiori, the Starfish Platforms from Fuuko were positioned in the Nebula of the Golden Darkness and would use their weapons in an effort to clear the region of space around the Sickly World.

The Kugimiya Master Shana would also travel to the world of Shiori. While these might be the enemy, the pain the peoples of this world bore was more than the Master could stand. She too would attempt to find a way two move the Nebula of the Golden Darkness from the planet's skies.

Key Intelligence Officer Ichinose would venture to Alice's World for rest after many hard campaigns. It was a relatively peaceful visit and Kotomi was not bullied by any of the store owners into buying anything.

The Legendary Kagamin evaded an assassination attempt by the Assassins of Shiki today. The general boldness of the assassins has several powers worried where they might strike next and who is paying them.

The Balsamic Fleet under Commander Tsukasa would head to Kannagi Space to see if the will of the God Empress could be spread to the worshipers of Nagi. The worshipers are resistant and only some chance events saved Tsukasa's Force from being overrun. The vindication of the Empire was shown as the Balsamic Fleet warships annihilated the largest ship of the Kannagi fleet.

The Dark Evangel would seek rest on the World of Sayuri. While the Gentle People of that world would do their best, the last leader of the Negima found no rest there. She would move on within a day of her arrival.

The Maidens of Rozen would seek combat with the KyoAni Empire. The Dark Sister World of Suigintou would successfully engage the Key Border World of Misuzu's defenses while the Red World of Shinku would keep Key Advisor Kyou's main fleet busy a few sectors away. While Shinku's force was badly damaged in the action, Suigintou manged to accomplish her goals.

President Tomoyo would engage JCS Forces near the border. Her fighters were able to out match the Shining Blue Dragons of Ami.

The Stormtroopers of Nayuki would fail to penetrate the HnG Combine was Maria's Forces were able to intercept them long before they reached any of the Combine's planets. While Maria is confident in her Hayate-class combat butlers, it is much easier to destroy transports in deep space than trained soldiers on the ground.

The Seekers of the Sacred Uguu~ would attempt to break their ship, the Ayu, out of impound. The Daemon Hunters of Mai, placed as the main security force within the Kanon Protectorate, were on duty. While they were not able to stop the Seekers from escaping, the Ayu remains impounded.

The Loli Warriors of Mei, in an effort to extract the wayward Peoples of Makoto, sent their fleet to the realm of the First One. While they were able to extract the People of Makoto, it cost the Mei heavily. Their loli power was not enough against the loli powers of Sakura, the First One. The Mei were forced to retreat.

The Peoples of Makoto, while having escaped from the First One, ended up off course again (their navigation computer remained damaged) and ended up in Touhou space. While repairing their damaged systems they successfully repulsed a patrol from Aya and denied the Touhou from getting a clear shot at destroying a unit of the KyoAni Empire.

Nagisa the Bold would repulse a counterattack by the Geass Regency's Royal Guard. Kallen's forces, while clever, were not a match for the heavier Dango Fleet.

Intelligence Officer St. Nagato-chi would probe the Time-Space Administration Bureau for signs of intent. Her forces would encounter the Mistress of Darkness Hayate. While the engagement provided more data on TSAB tactics and its capabilities, St. Nagato-chi would still manage to gain the advantage via superior tactics and the ability to spread her forces over a greater area than even the Hayate could blast. The KyoAni Empire would have its data.


Meanwhile:
Fate would investigate Commander Index of the Techno-Magi. The TSAB was concerned over heavy loses to KyoAni Forces. The investigation when as smoothly as it possibly could.

The White Devil would seek out the Kugimiya Padawan Yuuhi to give her new military training. Nanoha's training methods however tend towards the violent side of things and when things get bad, a "befriending" is standard policy. Even a Kugimiya Knight in not immune to being "befriended" by the White Devil.

The Red Knight of Darkness, Vita, would attacked suddenly by the Red Mage of the Kingdom of Night. Rin's surprise attack left Vita will little power to return fire. The seemingly random attacks by the Kingdom of Night continue to perplex both the KyoAni Empire and those in the Tenuous Alliance.


Saber, ruler of the Kingdom of Night, would seek out and engage the Kugimiya Knight Louise of the Void. The sword play verses the mostly magical power of the Master of the Void were more than the Kugimiya Knight could handle.

Not all went well for the Kingdom of Knight. The Loli Clones of Illya where defeated by President Hinagiku of the HnG Combine, when they attempted to land forces her one of her worlds.


Kugimiya Master Nagi would get into a debate on tactics with Techno-Commander Mikasa. The debate on technological superiority verses faith in one's goals continued for some time before Nagi displayed her own powers to prove that technology does not always know the answers.

Kugimiya Padawan Taiga would be recalled by the Red Dragons to end a dispute over territorial and trading rights with one of their lesser worlds. The Padawan took in upon herself to direct all actions and rewrite the entire agreement, overriding the Red Dragons authority. The heavy handedness seemed overly harsh to the Red Dragons, but in the end they saw her wisdom...or perhaps made themselves feel better my justifying it as wisdom, no one is certain.


The Mysterious Hanyuu would spread word of Oyashiro-sama to the world of Aquamarine. The peaceful world appealed to Hanyuu and she stayed for a while.

Collector for Oyashiro-sama remained in Touhou Space. She had been watching during the first part of the war and noticed a pattern. Every time the World of Knowledge was attacked, Protector Reimu would arrive to attempt to defend it. So the Collector sat in wait for the Protector...for Oyashiro-sama would want a new miko to add to the collection. Rena was correct when the Poor Shrine Maiden arrived. After a brief but intense fight, the Collector would gain her prize, even commenting that the Protector's voice was cute yet familiar.

The World of Rika-chama would repel an attack by the Geass Regency. The Loyal Retainers of Anya would attempt to assault Rika-chama, but the defenses of that world are far more tricky than one would expect seeing it from the systems edge. Anya's force was forced to retreat after only a short exchange with the planetary defenses.


Witch-Regent C.C. would go to the world of Persocom to collect much needed replacement drones for her Regency. The drones would fill in gaps opened up after the many attack by the KyoAni Empire on her territories.


Horo Enterprises would send a trade mission into Touhou Space to retrieve a supply of Spice stolen by the Black Magician Marisa. While it was a long chase, the company was able to track down the Magician and retake the Spice.

The Scarlet Vampire, Remilia would travel to the World of Knowledge. Her friend Patchilou had been attacked so many times that the defenses were useless. With great difficultly, the Scarlet Vampire would attempt to restore some sort of defense systems to the ravaged World of Knowledge.


Meanwhile on the other side of Touhou Space, the "Osaka" platforms of the Herald of Azumanga would engage elements of the Garden World of Suiseiseki. The slower platforms were unable to handle the swift and smaller vessels of the Maiden of Rozen (desu~). The older platforms were routed by the Suiseiseki (desu~). "All glory to the Suiseiseki (desu~)." Where the Maiden of Rozen is heading is unclear.
Nothing new to add considering that this is the penultimate chapter! :D
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby ithekro » Sun Apr 05, 2009 4:21 am

Dawn of War: (Aquamarine 9)

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The war comes to an early head as the KyoAni Empire is thrown into chaos. A strike team from the JCS under Kugimiya Master Shana attempts to pierce the heart of the KyoAni Empire early in the war.

Master Shana was able to gather a force consisting of elements from the Shining Blue Dragons of Ami, Techno-Magi Commander Mikasa's Fleet, Mistress of Darkness Hayate from the TSAB, and even managed to convince the FIrst One Sakura, to join their attack against Key Forces.

Defending against this attack, President Tomoyo mustered what forces she could while confronting Master Shana directly.

Nagisa the Bold's Dango Fleet would engage the First One and successfully divert the spells of Sakura from harming the local planets.

Defense Forces from Mai were able to intercept the Mistress of Darkness. While the powerful TSAB Commander fought well, the Daemon Hunters were able to track her movements and swiftly counter her every step. Hayate was forced to fall back.

The Starfish Warriors of Fuuko engaged the Shining Dragons of Ami in a tense battle in the orbit of Fuuko itself. While their Starfish Platforms were not designed for planetary defense in mind, recent training had brought their tactical skills up to the challenge. Using the bombardment weaponry as long range suppression fire, Fuuko was able to hold the Blue Dragons at a distance until the lighter escort vessel could pick off the larger of the Dragon's capital ships. The Blue Dragons would be forced to fall back to JCS space.

The Stormtroopers of Nayuki where caught in open space by Techno-Commander Mikasa. And while the Nayuki troops were able to board some of the Techno-Magi ships, the action resulted in heavy loses for the Stormtroopers who retreated to a nearby world.

Master Shana's fleet was engaged by President Tomoyo's personal fleet. Both forces were equally matched. The destruction was terrible. Master Shana decided to board the KyoAni Flagship to end the battle. President Tomoyo's unarmed combat style would seem to be inferior to a sword. But Shana may have underestimated the President. The lightning reflexes of Tomoyo and the speed of her kicks got under the Kugimiya Master's blade and knocked Shana into a nearby wall. Bruised, the Master returned to the battle, but again Tomoyo's speed proved to be too much for Shana, being kicked in the head from behind before she could attempt to parry. Beaten, and bruised, the Kugimiya Master was forced to retreat from Tomoyo's ship and withdraw her forces in defeat. President Tomoyo had managed to defend the Empire against an impressive invasion force...just as St. Nagato-chi had predicted in her War Games.

Meanwhile the KyoAni Empire's offensive into Geass Space was stalled by a full on counter attack. Witch-Regent C.C. would personally intercept and neutralize the KyoAni advantage by taking out their space fleet and intelligence gathering power by engaging Intelligence Officer Ichinose's Fleet. With that out of the way C.C. sent her other force to engage the KyoAni Army Forces on the ground.

The Royal Guardsmen under Kallen were unable to break the siege from the Moe Marines of Mikuru, but the Loyal Retainers of Anya managed to loosen the grip of the Animalistic Peoples of Makoto. Witch-Regent C.C. hopes this action will be enough for her to gain some breathing room against the KyoAni Empire.

The two major offensives against her rule would cause God Empress Haruhi to call a meeting of her general staff. While Haruhi would argue with the Legendary Kagamin about how best to solve the economic crisis this war will cause, St. Nagato-chi and Key Advisor Kyou would go around and around about where to establish defensive lines and the distribution of various fleets. The God Empress decided to handle the economics herself for the time being and to move more forces to Key Space over the silent objection of St. Nagato-chi.

The Balsamic Fleet would return home to the Stars of Fortune for some much needed repairs. The fleet would stop at the Trade World of Izumi for several days of R&R. The prices seemed high though. Commander Tsukasa would attempt to find out if something was up, but the planetary authorities were able to turn her investigation around and actually raise prices higher on a few services before the Fleet left orbit for home.

The Gentle People of Sayuri sent desperately needed aid to the Sickly World of Shiori. Slowly recovering after the coming of the Nebula of the Golden Darkness, it is still unclear if the Sickly World can survive.

The Key Border World of Misuzu and the Loli Warriors of Mei would deflect a border incursion by the Touhou into Key Space. A recon force from Aya and supported by the new fleet of Knowledge would be unable to penetrate KyoAni defense with the Recon Force under Aya getting the worst of the fight from the Loli's of Mei.

The Seekers of the Sacred Uguu~, without a ship, would be forced to book passage with ARIA Corporation to get from world to world. Traveling to Alice's World for a stopover, the Seekers managed to find a lead on the Sacred Uguu~ from one of the local tourist guides. The problem would be getting their ship back to follow up on the lead....


The Diet Warriors of Minori would engage the Black Magician Marisa on the border of JCS space. The number of Touhou incursions was forcing the JCS to split its forces too thinly. Even though the Touhou was driven off, the larger areas of space to patrol was making it difficult to focus on containing the KyoAni Empire.

The Kingdom of Night's attacks on the JCS would lead Saber to the Heralds of Azumanga. Their old and beaten "Osaka"-class platforms stood no chance against Saber's fresh fighting force. The ancient Heralds were pushed aside.


Kugimiya Knight Louise of the Void would be sent to Techno-Magi Commander Index to train her forces in the use of void magics. Not everything went as planned since when the Master of the Void left, there was a lot of damage to Index's forces.

Kugimiya Padawan Taiga would attempt to liberate the Brave Blade's Red Queen from under the KyoAni heel. The attempt appears to have liberated that world for the moment.

Kugimiya Padawan Yuuhi would be sent to find the Dark Envangel as one of her trails. Evangeline was elusive, but Yuuhi managed to find her eventually, thus passing one of her trails.

Kugimya Master Nagi was intercepted by a fast moving warship and captured. In the darkness she would only here "Hauu~, you are so cute, I'm taking you home." It is possible that the Kugimiya Master would later escape from the Collector for Oyashiro-sama...but for now....Rena had a new prize.

TSAB's Red Knight, Vita would get lost in the Nebula of the Golden Darkness for a time and unable to help in the battles of the day.

The While Devil would head to the headquarters of Horo Enterprises to discover why their rates were lower for KyoAni Forces. The raw deal provided by the God Empress Haruhi in exchange for independence did not sit well with Nanoha. And while she threatened to "befriend" everyone in the room, she decide it was best to strike at the KyoAni for this injustice.

President Hinagiku would be brought before the TSAB's Commander Fate for a hearing into the activities of the HnG Combine in neutral space. While President Hinagiku attempted to justify their actions in the name of containing the KyoAni Empire, Fate decided to punish the President with a fine for potential damage to some systems that may never recover. This came as a warning for the HnG Combine about their more independent nature outside the JCS, and how those days might be numbered.

Maria, on the other hand, was engaged with trying to prevent the expansion of Rozen Space into the HnG Combine. The Red World of Shinku had sent forces to claim some bordering systems and Maria's forces challenged their claim. Unfortunately the Maidens of Rozen where prepared for Maria's advance and stopped her cold.

Forces from the Dark World of Suigintou would attempt to push into the Kingdom of Night. The Red Mage, finally returning from her long streak of lighting invasions, would come to push the Rozen's force aside. Suigintou's fleet was forced to retreat.

The Loli Clones of Illya would attempt an invasion of Hinamizawa Space for the Kingdom of Night's efforts to combine the former DEEN Directorate powers once again. Oyashiro-sama (Hanyuu) herself would deny the Loli clones entry into her space.

Then there was the tale of the Maiden of Rozen's invasion of the World of Rika-chama. Suiseiseki would take the world her herself (desu~). Nothing shall stop Suiseiseki (desu~). Or so the the Maiden of Rozen thought (nii-pah~) (Mii~) After a tense battle in the orbit of Rika-chama, Suseiseki's forces were unable to continue their attack. "This isn't over (desu~). I will win (desu~). A little chibi-girl won't beat, Suiseiseki (desu~)" But then the Maiden of Rozen went whoosh whoosh out of the system (nano desuo~)...Nii-pah.


The Kannagi Theocracy would send out worshipers on ARIA Corporation vessels in an effort to maintain their own ships for planetary defense. The prices to Aquamarine were affordable and as a travel hub, the worshipers of Nagi would be able to find converts much more easily than in other places.


Tension over the continual mounting losses of the Gensokyo Expeditionary Force erupted between Protector Reimu and Remilia the Scarlet Vampire. While both had been able at times to defend their homes, they had not yet been able to prevent an attack to the World of Knowledge. Reimu, having enough stormed out declaring she would defend their new realm with whatever it takes to survive.


The Chii of Persocom would send a transport to collect their yearly supply of the Spice Amu. Even under KyoAni control, the Spice was still needed for certain processes to take place. It is fortunate that the Empire's control over the world is not so tight as others.


The Assassins of Shiki would assassinate the KyoAni governor of the Brave Blade World of Kirino. This contract is hoped to be able to bring the world out from under the God Empress' grip....
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby chaosprophet » Sun Apr 05, 2009 4:39 am

Great ending for the first period! Epic battle between Shana and Tomoyo!
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby ithekro » Sun Apr 05, 2009 6:52 am

Dawn of War: (epilogue)


The first part of the war had come to a bloody end. The Kugimiya Master Shana was forced to retreat back into JCS Space. While battered, the JCS was holding despite great losses.

The God Empress Haruhi would grant President Tomoyo the Aquamarine Metal For Courage in the face of overwhelming odds.

The KyoAni Empire would control the majority of the Core Worlds at the end of this phase of the war with nine of the sixteen major systems firming in the God Empress' hands. The Tenuous Alliance between the JCS, the HnG Combine, the Kugimiya Knights, and the TSAB would hold five systems. The remaining two worlds being held by the Kingdom of Night and the Cult of Oyashiro-sama.

The Gensokyo Expeditionary Force, or Touhou, had been badly beaten in their first engagements of the war with few real victories of note. The World of Knowledge would need a reconstruction project to get everything in order and the Black Magician had yet to steal anything precious. Protector Reimu was having second thoughts about this expedition, but would resolve to maintain their positions to keep the hostile locals from finding their way into Gensokyo.

The Geass Regency had been under heavy attacks from the KyoAni Empire after the Witch-Regent C.C. decided to make her bid for the core worlds in the name of her lord and master. While she was able to break the KyoAni siege to her territories, the core worlds are still just outside her grasp.

The Kingdom of Night holds firm in its position in and near the Core Worlds.

The Cult of Oyashiro-sama also stands firm in and near the Core Worlds...though several of the Collector's prizes were exchanged in the lull in the war.

The Brave Blade Worlds are under the occupation of the KyoAni Empire. But those loyal to the Red Queen Tamaki are in rebellion against the God Empress Haruhi. Only time will tell if they can break free.

The Planet Shugo Chara is also under the control of the KyoAni Empire, but the security is fairly weak due to the distance way from KyoAni Space. Horo Enterprises, under the grace of the God Empress, has been allowed to remain as the galaxy's prime mover of the Spice Amu.

ARIA Corporation may see some reorganization after its Aquamarine for Aquamarine advertising campaign went bust. Shifting worlds and names is being considered to increase revenue.

The Nebula of the Golden Darkness no longer threatens the Sickly World of Shiori. However the Nebula has grown and for unknown reasons shifts positions in the galaxy. It is almost certain this in not a natural nebula.

The Assassins of Shiki have retreated to their homeworld for the time being. They await their next contract.

The First One, Sakura, while not as powerful as she once was, remains in her home near the Core Worlds as a reminder to the great powers to be mindful of their actions.

Persocom continues on its business as it has always done.

The Kannagi Theocracy continues to spread the Song of Nagi across the stars. Listen to it?

The Dark Evangel, Last of the Negima, continues to wonder the stars. Once day she hopes to regain some of her lost powers and maybe find her lost friends.

The Maidens of Rozen plot to regain their lost glory. Now outside the Core Worlds, the three remaining sister worlds band together to face the challenges ahead. (desu~)
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby melange » Sun Apr 05, 2009 7:01 am

Tomoyo vs Shana description made me think of LoGH when the Rosenritter infiltrate Reuenthal's flagship while the description of Kyou vs Yuki battle begs someone to splice footage of Kyou going "Chigau~~~" (at Kotomi) with that of an unblinking Yuki...
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby maikun » Sun Apr 05, 2009 12:31 pm

Epic battle =3
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby melange » Mon Apr 06, 2009 3:23 am

so i tried to splice Kyou and Yuki clips to show them arguing over Kyoani Empire fleet placements... and came out with this..


I suck at video editing... ORZ
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