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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby chaosprophet » Mon Apr 06, 2009 3:28 am

lol! that was pretty funny!
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby ithekro » Mon Apr 06, 2009 4:10 am

heh. It will do.
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby CrowKenobi » Mon Apr 06, 2009 4:41 am

Spoiler for Suggested changes for Moe Chronicles of Aquamarine, Vol. 9:
ithekro wrote:Dawn of War: (Aquamarine 9)

The war comes to an early head as the KyoAni Empire is thrown into chaos. A strike team from the JCS under Kugimiya Master Shana attempts to pierce the heart of the KyoAni Empire early in the war.

Master Shana was able to gather a force consisting of elements from the Shining Blue Dragons of Ami, Techno-Magi Commander Mikasa's Fleet, Mistress of Darkness Hayate from the TSAB, and even managed to convince the FIrst One Sakura, to join their attack against Key Forces.

Defending against this attack, President Tomoyo mustered what forces she could while confronting Master Shana directly.

Nagisa the Bold's Dango Fleet would engage the First One and successfully divert the spells of Sakura from harming the local planets.

Defense Forces from Mai were able to intercept the Mistress of Darkness. While the powerful TSAB Commander fought well, the Daemon Hunters were able to track her movements and swiftly counter her every step. Hayate was forced to fall back.

The Starfish Warriors of Fuuko engaged the Shining Dragons of Ami in a tense battle in the orbit of Fuuko itself. While their Starfish Platforms were not designed for planetary defense in mind, recent training had brought their tactical skills up to the challenge as needed. Using the bombardment weaponry as long range suppression fire, Fuuko was able to hold the Blue Dragons at a distance until the lighter escort vessel could pick off the larger of the Dragon's capital ships. The Blue Dragons would be forced to fall back to JCS space.

The Stormtroopers of Nayuki where caught in open space by Techno-Commander Mikasa. And while the Nayuki troops were able to board some of the Techno-Magi ships, the action resulted in heavy loses for the Stormtroopers who retreated to a nearby world.

Master Shana's fleet was engaged by President Tomoyo's personal fleet. Both forces were equally matched. The destruction was terrible. Master Shana decided to board the KyoAni Flagship to end the battle. President Tomoyo's unarmed combat style would seem to be inferior to a sword. But Shana may have underestimated the President. The lightning reflexes of Tomoyo and the speed of her kicks got under the Kugimiya Master's blade and knocked Shana into a nearby wall. Bruised, the Master returned to the battle, but again Tomoyo's speed proved to be too much for Shana, being kicked in the head from behind before she could attempt to parry. Beaten, and bruised, the Kugimiya Master was forced to retreat from Tomoyo's ship and withdraw her forces in defeat. President Tomoyo had managed to defend the Empire against an impressive invasion force...just as St. Nagato-chi had predicted in her War Games.

Meanwhile the KyoAni Empire's offensive into Geass Space was stalled by a full on counter attack. Witch-Regent C.C. would personally intercept and neutralize the KyoAni advantage by taking out their space fleet and intelligence gathering power by engaging Intelligence Officer Ichinose's Fleet. With that out of the way C.C. sent her other force to engage the KyoAni Army Forces on the ground.

The Royal Guardsmen under Kallen were unable to break the siege from the Moe Marines of Mikuru, but the Loyal Retainers of Anya managed to loosen the grip of the Animalistic Peoples of Makoto. Witch-Regent C.C. hopes this action will be enough for her to gain some breathing room against the KyoAni Empire.

The two major offensives against her rule would cause God Empress Haruhi to call a meeting of her general staff. While Haruhi would argue with the Legendary Kagamin about how best to solve the economic crisis this war will cause, St. Nagato-chi and Key Advisor Kyou would go around and around about where to establish defensive lines and the distribution of various fleets. The God Empress decided to handle the economics herself for the time being and to move more forces to Key Space over the silent objection of St. Nagato-chi.

The Balsamic Fleet would return home to the Stars of Fortune for some much needed repairs. The fleet would stop at the Trade World of Izumi for several days of R&R. The prices seemed high though. Commander Tsukasa would attempt to find out if something was up, but the planetary authorities were able to turn her investigation around and actually raise prices higher on a few services before the Fleet left orbit for home.

The Gentle People of Sayuri sent desperately needed aid to the Sickly World of Shiori. Slowly recovering after the coming of the Nebula of the Golden Darkness, it is still unclear if the Sickly World can survive.

The Key Border World of Misuzu and the Loli Warriors of Mei would deflect a border incursion by the Touhou into Key Space. A recon force from Aya and supported by the new fleet of Knowledge would be unable to penetrate KyoAni defense with the Recon Force under Aya getting the worst of the fight from the Loli's of Mei.

The Seekers of the Sacred Uguu~, without a ship, would be forced to book passage with ARIA Corporation to get from world to world. Traveling to Alice's World for a stopover, the Seekers managed to find a lead on the Sacred Uguu~ from one of the local tourist guides. The problem would be getting their ship back to follow up on the lead....


The Diet Warriors of Minori would engage the Black Magician Marisa on the border of JCS space. The number of Touhou incursions was forcing the JCS to split its forces too thinly. Even though the Touhou was driven off, the larger areas of space to patrol was making it difficult to focus on containing the KyoAni Empire.

The Kingdom of Night's attacks on the JCS would lead Saber to the Heralds of Azumanga. Their old and beaten "Osaka"-class platforms stood no chance against Saber's fresh fighting force. The ancient Heralds were pushed aside.


Kugimiya Knight Louise of the Void would be sent to Techno-Magi Commander Index to train her forces in the use of void magics. Not everything went as planned since when the Master of the Void left, there was a lot of damage to Index's forces.

Kugimiya Padawan Taiga would attempt to liberate the Brave Blade's Red Queen from under the KyoAni heel. The attempt appears to have liberated that world for the moment.

Kugimiya Padawan Yuuhi would be sent to find the Dark Envangel as one of her trails. Evangeline was elusive, but Yuuhi managed to find her eventually, thus passing one of her trails.

Kugimya Master Nagi was intercepted by a fast moving warship and captured. In the darkness she would only here "Hauu~, you are so cute, I'm taking you home." It is possible that the Kugimiya Master would later escape from the Collector for Oyashiro-sama...but for now....Rena had a new prize.

TSAB's Red Knight, Vita would get lost in the Nebula of the Golden Darkness for a time and unable to help in the battles of the day.

The While Devil would head to the headquarters of Horo Enterprises to discover why their rates were lower for KyoAni Forces. The raw deal provided by the God Empress Haruhi in exchange for independence did not sit well with Nanoha. And while she threatened to "befriend" everyone in the room, she decide it was best to strike at the KyoAni for this injustice.

President Hinagiku would be brought before the TSAB's Commander Fate for a hearing into the activities of the HnG Combine in neutral space. While President Hinagiku attempted to justify their actions in the name of containing the KyoAni Empire, Fate decided to punish the President with a fine for potential damage to some systems that may never recover. This came as a warning for the HnG Combine about their more independent nature outside the JCS, and how those days might be numbered.

Maria, on the other hand, was engaged with trying to prevent the expansion of Rozen Space into the HnG Combine. The Red World of Shinku had sent forces to claim some bordering systems and Maria's forces challenged their claim. Unfortunately the Maidens of Rozen where prepared for Maria's advance and stopped her cold.

Forces from the Dark World of Suigintou would attempt to push into the Kingdom of Night. The Red Mage, finally returning from her long streak of lighting invasions, would come to push the Rozen's force aside. Suigintou's fleet was forced to retreat.

The Loli Clones of Illya would attempt an invasion of Hinamizawa Space for the Kingdom of Night's efforts to combine the former DEEN Directorate powers once again. Oyashiro-sama (Hanyuu) herself would deny the Loli clones entry into her space.

Then there was the tale of the Maiden of Rozen's invasion of the World of Rika-chama. Suiseiseki would take the world her herself (desu~). Nothing shall stop Suiseiseki (desu~). Or so the the Maiden of Rozen thought (nii-pah~) (Mii~) After a tense battle in the orbit of Rika-chama, Suseiseki's forces were unable to continue their attack. "This isn't over (desu~). I will win (desu~). A little chibi-girl won't beat, Suiseiseki (desu~)" But then the Maiden of Rozen went whoosh whoosh out of the system (nano desuo~)...Nii-pah.


The Kannagi Theocracy would send out worshipers on ARIA Corporation vessels in an effort to maintain their own ships for planetary defense. The prices to Aquamarine were affordable and as a travel hub, the worshipers of Nagi would be able to find converts much more easily than in other places.


Tension over the continual mounting losses of the Gensokyo Expeditionary Force erupted between Protector Reimu and Remilia the Scarlet Vampire. While both had been able at times to defend their homes, they had not yet been able to prevent an attack to the World of Knowledge. Reimu, having enough stormed out declaring she would defend their new realm with whatever it takes to survive.


The Chii of Persocom would send a transport to collect their yearly supply of the Spice Amu. Even under KyoAni control, the Spice was still needed for certain processes to take place. It is fortunate that the Empire's control over the world is not so tight as others.


The Assassins of Shiki would assassinate the KyoAni governor of the Brave Blade World of Kirino. This contract is hoped to be able to bring the world out from under the God Empress' grip....
A lot going on there! Good job! :D

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Spoiler for Suggested changes for Moe Chronicles of Aquamarine, Epilogue:
ithekro wrote:Dawn of War: (epilogue)


The first part of the war had come to a bloody end. The Kugimiya Master Shana was forced to retreat back into JCS Space. While battered, the JCS was holding despite great losses.

The God Empress Haruhi would grant President Tomoyo the Aquamarine Metal For Courage in the face of overwhelming odds.

The KyoAni Empire would control the majority of the Core Worlds at the end of this phase of the war with nine of the sixteen major systems firming in the God Empress' hands. The Tenuous Alliance between the JCS, the HnG Combine, the Kugimiya Knights, and the TSAB would hold five systems. The remaining two worlds being held by the Kingdom of Night and the Cult of Oyashiro-sama.

The Gensokyo Expeditionary Force, or Touhou, had been badly beaten in their first engagements of the war with few real victories of note. The World of Knowledge would need a reconstruction project to get everything in order and the Black Magician had yet to steal anything precious. Protector Reimu was having second thoughts about this expedition, but would resolve to maintain their positions to keep the hostile locals from finding their way into Gensokyo.

The Geass Regency had been under heavy attacks from the KyoAni Empire after the Witch-Regent C.C. decided to make her bid for the core worlds in the name of her lord and master. While she was able to break the KyoAni siege to her territories, the core worlds are still just outside her grasp.

The Kingdom of Night holds firm in its position in and near the Core Worlds.

The Cult of Oyashiro-sama also stands firm in and near the Core Worlds...though several of the Collector's prizes were exchanged in the lull in the war.

The Brave Blade Worlds are under the occupation of the KyoAni Empire. But those loyal to the Red Queen Tamaki are in rebellion against the God Empress Haruhi. Only time will tell if they can break free.

The Planet Shugo Chara is also under the control of the KyoAni Empire, but the security is fairly weak due to the distance way from KyoAni Space. Horo Enterprises, under the grace of the God Empress, has been allowed to remain as the galaxy's prime mover of the Spice Amu.

ARIA Corporation may see some reorganization after its Aquamarine for Aquamarine advertising campaign went bust. Shifting worlds and names is being considered to increase revenue.

The Nebula of the Golden Darkness no longer threatens the Sickly World of Shiori. However the Nebula has grown and for unknown reasons shifts positions in the galaxy. It is almost certain this in not a natural nebula.

The Assassins of Shiki have retreated to their homeworld for the time being. They await their next contract.

The First One, Sakura, while not as powerful as she once was, remains in her home near the Core Worlds as a reminder to the great powers to be mindful of their actions.

Persocom continues on its business as it has always done.

The Kannagi Theocracy continues to spread the Song of Nagi across the stars. Listen to it?

The Dark Evangel, Last of the Negima, continues to wonder the stars. Once day she hopes to regain some of her lost powers and maybe find her lost friends.

The Maidens of Rozen plot to regain their lost glory. Now outside the Core Worlds, the three remaining sister worlds band together to face the challenges ahead. (desu~)
And with that, the first chapter of the newest battle has come to its conclusion. What will the Moe Chronicles of Topaz bring us? :D
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby ithekro » Mon Apr 06, 2009 5:17 am

Fixed

I believe what is next will be: "Blade of the Rebellion"
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Re: [STORY] Dawn of War (Aquamarine)

Postby Geraldmirs » Wed Jul 09, 2014 6:33 am

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