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[FACTION] The Outer Rim

Postby ithekro » Fri Mar 20, 2009 8:53 pm

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The Brave Blade Worlds: - Bamboo Blade
-Red Queen of Blades - Tamaki
-Yellow Blades of Kirino (Lion-chan)
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ARIA Corporation: - ARIA
-Aquamarine - Akari
-Alice's World - Alice
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Horo Enterprises ("the Spice must flow") - Spice and Wolf

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Kannagi Theocracy - Nagi - Kannagi

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Nebula of the Golden Darkness - Yami - To Love-ru

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Shugo Chara: Ice Planet: Source of the Spice - Amu - Shugo Chara!

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The Negima Remnant - (altered this because the rest was too long to fit on the signature - melange)
Dark Evangel, Last Survivor of the Negima Empire - Evangeline -Negima!

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"The upheavals of the First Moe War and the implosion of the
Great Void has rendered this once vast empire a shadow of itself"
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These are the worlds beyond the great powers.
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Re: [FACTION] The Outer Rim

Postby melange » Sun Mar 22, 2009 7:24 pm

wrote some background for Shugo Chara. Objective was to set up a possible 'amicable solution' no matter which way the Horo vs Amu fight in Amethyst 7 goes.

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Shugo Chara : Ice Planet: Source of the Spice
This ice planet noted for its production of the acclaimed 'cool spice' is an important part of Horo Enterprises' intergalactic monopoly of spice. It is currently administered by the almost autonomous 'Easter Auxiliary' of H.E. under whose auspices many abuses of authority for the aggrandizement of the Easter administrators are advanced without the assent, approval, and awareness of Horo HQ.

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The Amulet Assembly
Abhorred by Easter agents as "The Amulet Insurgency," the Amulet Assembly believes that the people of Shugo Chara have the right to self-determination and self-realization. Aggregating around the appealing and messianic (even though it is not part of her character at all!) figure of Hinamori Amu and assuming the ambiguous aliases of 'King', 'Queen', 'Jack', 'Ace', 'Joker', and many more, the adherents of the Assembly have caused much anger and anguish for the Easter administrators. Easter Auxiliary security forces have been having a hard time dealing with this freedom-fighting group as the Assembly members are hidden in plain view and invisible to those whose hearts have not yet been opened.


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Re: [FACTION] The Outer Rim

Postby Corni » Mon Mar 23, 2009 5:30 am

Anyway can i help writing some background for Bamboo Blade and Yuuhi ???
You can edit if i make some fact or grammar mistake...
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Re: [FACTION] The Outer Rim

Postby melange » Mon Mar 23, 2009 5:43 am

uis wrote:Anyway can i help writing some background for Bamboo Blade and Yuuhi ???
You can edit if i make some fact or grammar mistake...

Sure, give it a shot
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Re: [FACTION] The Outer Rim

Postby Corni » Mon Mar 23, 2009 6:02 am

Bamboo Blade background from me...

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The Brave Blade Worlds
Brave Blade Worlds known as place only for swordwielder. For generation, this world protect by Red Queen of Blades, Tamaki. But because of multiple loss in first great moe war, Tamaki call for new apprentice to assist her in second moe war.

Kirino known as Lion-chan because her braveness in battlefield take the challenge. She manage to defeat all her opponent and given reward of new title, Yellow Blade.

With a new surprising event like new Touhou fleet and foundation of Grand Systems of the JCS, let see how Brave Blade Worlds survive and continue to fight the great powers.
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Re: [FACTION] The Outer Rim

Postby Corni » Mon Mar 23, 2009 6:38 am

Second background from me... I just trying it and i feel it funny...
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Nebula of the Golden Darkness
The place for assassin. Originally this place is for trash and people that loss in first great moe war. With their hatred and disgust to great powers, they train to become expert assasin.

In this dark and sorrow world come new leader to bring peace and love to this Nebula, Yami-chan. The extreme skilled assassin with signature ability "transformation", Yami-chan become new leader in this dark and deserted world.

Given title of Golden Darkness by her people, Yami bring love and peaceful world to her follower. Anyway how long love and peace will remain in this dark Nebula ?. How Yami-chan balance her profession and leadership to protect this world from great powers ?.
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Re: [FACTION] The Outer Rim

Postby ithekro » Mon Mar 23, 2009 9:40 am

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Re: [FACTION] The Outer Rim

Postby melange » Tue Mar 24, 2009 12:22 am

Idea dump (no I haven't watched ARIA)

Historical Venice = Most Serene Republic of Venice
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Venice_Republic

ARIA is set in Neo-Venezia (Mars)
so.. "Most Serene Republic of Neo-Venezia"?
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Re: [FACTION] The Outer Rim

Postby ithekro » Tue Mar 24, 2009 12:34 am

Possible. I was thinking of it as a trade company or a passager line that is rather small (going unnoticed by the HnG Combine for the most part).

That or its a tourist trap.
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Re: [FACTION] The Outer Rim

Postby melange » Tue Mar 24, 2009 5:21 am

uis wrote:Bamboo Blade background from me...
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The Brave Blade Worlds
Brave Blade Worlds known as place only for swordwielder. For generation, this world protect by Red Queen of Blades, Tamaki. But because of multiple loss in first great moe war, Tamaki call for new apprentice to assist her in second moe war.

Kirino known as Lion-chan because her braveness in battlefield take the challenge. She manage to defeat all her opponent and given reward of new title, Yellow Blade.

With a new surprising event like new Touhou fleet and foundation of Grand Systems of the JCS, let see how Brave Blade Worlds survive and continue to fight the great powers.

Let me first apologize for using ur blurb as an inspirational draft..

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Since time immemorial the Brave Blade Worlds have valued and elevated the "Way of the Sword" to its finest form. They practiced a form of meritocracy, organizing regular championships to decide the most skilled swordsman or swordswoman to whom the leadership of their society would devolve to. Since the beginning of the last Great Moe War, this position has been held by Kawazoe Tamaki, so skilled was she that she has gained the title "The Red Queen of Blades".

Although the Brave Blade Worlds did not come off well in the First Moe War, they hung on through the strength of their natural tenacity. They even managed to dispatch a colonizing force to a nearby world led by the Red Queen's close comrade, Kirino of the Yellow Blades, while the rest of the galaxy was distracted by the implosion of the Great Void and the advent of the Touhou.

The Brave Blade Worlds do not condone violence for its own sake, emphasizing that their art is but a way to cultivate the mind and spirit, but will defend themselves vigorously against any who dare encroach upon them or bully others.

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ithekro wrote:Possible. I was thinking of it as a trade company or a passager line that is rather small (going unnoticed by the HnG Combine for the most part).

That or its a tourist trap.

Hmm.. with two worlds I think the 'rather small' line is going to be hard to justify. What about a nation whose main economic activity is tourism?

"Spend your holidays at the La Serenissima!" (now have I completely butchered ARIA yet or not? ^^; )
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Re: [FACTION] The Outer Rim

Postby FNSNA » Tue Mar 24, 2009 6:54 am

-Alice's World - Alice

Spoiler:
why not: Orange Princess (or Twilight Princess)
cuz that was Alice's Prima title, being consistent with Akari's Aquamarine
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Re: [FACTION] The Outer Rim

Postby Marinara » Tue Mar 24, 2009 6:57 am

Mmm, I'm not sure I even like Akari's title there, and I oppose the addition to Alice's title, mainly for the spoiler reasons. Some people really complained with the whole "Aquamarine for Aquamarine" campaign, so I don't think it'd be such a good idea to add onto that with Alice.
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Re: [FACTION] The Outer Rim

Postby Kaito_Dash » Tue Mar 24, 2009 9:26 pm

melange wrote:Idea dump (no I haven't watched ARIA)

Historical Venice = Most Serene Republic of Venice
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Venice_Republic

ARIA is set in Neo-Venezia (Mars)
so.. "Most Serene Republic of Neo-Venezia"?

But actually ARIA and Neo-Venezia is set on the Mars renamed 'Aqua', so why not 'The Serene Planet of Aqua'? It would be sound more suitable for Space Opera.
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Re: [FACTION] The Outer Rim

Postby melange » Wed Mar 25, 2009 6:30 am

Kaito_Dash wrote:
melange wrote:Idea dump (no I haven't watched ARIA)

Historical Venice = Most Serene Republic of Venice
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Venice_Republic

ARIA is set in Neo-Venezia (Mars)
so.. "Most Serene Republic of Neo-Venezia"?

But actually ARIA and Neo-Venezia is set on the Mars renamed 'Aqua', so why not 'The Serene Planet of Aqua'? It would be sound more suitable for Space Opera.

Well, as you will notice in the other descriptions in Space Opera, things are loosely based, (but still based) on elements in the series, but this doesn't not mean they have to be adopted wholesale/literally. For example, the God-Empress title for Haruhi is definitely not something that comes from the series but a build up of/amplification of her supposed 'deity'-like status (after cross fertilization with Warhammer 40k). Like the name of Moon-lit Quadrant for the Type Moon series is a tangential reference to one of the more famous Typemoon fansites etc.. Loosely basing things and bring in other tangential references helps make Space Opera feel familiar yet not boring.

"The Most Serene Republic of Neo-Venezia" thing was suggested because it was vaguely 'nation-like' and is cross-fertilizing/making reference to other things as well. But yes, it is still just a suggestion... awaiting a more thorough write-up by someone more familiar to the series..
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Re: [FACTION] The Outer Rim

Postby Juice » Thu Mar 26, 2009 6:43 am

Aqua Planet
Orange Planet
Both under "The Most Serene Republic of Neo-Venezia"

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*Juice edit: "Nation of terraformed planets shrouded in the mysticism of the Undine, mythical guides of the seas and keepers of the past"*
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