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ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Chocola » Mon Feb 23, 2009 2:28 am

Do you like poetry? If you do, then you can try this challenge. Just write a poem about any of the 64 characters in ISML 2009. The rules are simple:
  1. It must be at least a haiku.
  2. Free verse is discouraged, so try a blank verse if you have more than one stanza.
  3. Because of spoilers, you might want to spoiler tag either your poem or the character it's for.
Well I guess that's it! Just post your poems here. I'll start with one of mine.

My dear friend, what is it that I seek?
Perhaps it is a knight from a faraway land.
Ah yes, I see him there on the nearby shore.
Sadly, it is a place that I cannot reach
While my cursed self cannot escape
From the wicked swamp of eternal time.

My friend, what kind of world lies outside?
Is it something worth struggling for?
I wonder if anything beyond my reach
Is worth the pain of trying yet again?
But I don't want to know lies outside.
Since all I have left is my imagination.

I still want to know the world that lies outside.
So I climbed again to the best of my ability.
And then, my friend, I realized it.
The more I try and the higher I climb,
The pain increases when i fall down again.
What will it take for you to forgive me?
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And that is...the view from the top.
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by waterfall » Mon Feb 23, 2009 2:31 am

random poems:

Many characters in ISML planned
To capture the prettiest tiara in the land
Mikuru’s pretty cute
And Haruhi’s a beut
But Yuki’s moe? IT’S OVER NINE THOUSAAANND!

During nominations come characters got beat
That Minty thought were actually quite neat.
“Not one vote for Ryoko?
Are all voters loco?”
Turns out, Yuki hacked Crisu’s spreadsheet.

The plot of this global moe powwow
Is so good even critics say “holy cow!”
But the voters have the power
To shape the story’s every hour.
If you want a happy ending VOTE YUKI NAO.

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The contestants gather by the shores of the sea
Fighting for permanence in ISML history.
The prelims are over—the tourney commences
And voters despair despite our cynical defenses.
So begins the opening act, the opening scene,
Of ISML 09—Aquamarine.

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Fighting the Demons
To protect the ones she loves--
Kawasumi Mai
meh fail poem
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by FNSNA » Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:16 pm

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I stood under the bright full moon
Inside the empty desolate school
I stood there, waiting and fighting demons
Without any help, I stood there all alone

Darkness surrounds my four corners
The blade is my only ally
I stood there, looking up at the sky
I stood there, waiting and waiting

The school that was filled with joy before
That same school is now a ground for the dead
Student's roam freely at daytime
The hallway is now a battlefield

It seems the demons aren't coming out
I relax myself, putting down my sword
I grab my beef bowl out and start eating it
I grab my sword and go home afterward

This lonely sequence repeats every night
I pick my sword up to go to school at night
I wait under the moonlight for the demons
To protect the ones I have treasured so much

But why am I doing this so lonely?
Why no one else can sense the demons?
Why do these demons exits in the first place?
For who am I protecting the school so dearly?

For Saiyuri? Nay. She is not why?
But this boy, this boy that I adored so much
For this boy, I will protect the school
For this boy, I will defeat the demons

Even through this boy will not return
I hope my poem will not be very bad
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Corni » Wed Feb 25, 2009 4:57 am

I love poem... I like write poem but that long time ago...
I will tryin... i know it quite fail but anyway...
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The first kiss you give me
I still remember until this time
Even i deny my feeling
I still love you my fiancee

The feeling i hide
Because i too shy
But i trying all the courage
To admit i love you my fiancee

But the truth is evil
Destiny is not there for me
I know you hiding something
I still not enough for you my fiancee

I trying to be better
I want understand you more
Be a wife that you can proud
To match to you my fiancee

The curry i make for you
The cake when your birthday
Just to make you smiling
Anything for you my fiancee

Finally you reply me
You said you love me
Even you said you just thinking
I am so happy my fiancee

I need to go far
Even for a little time
But you still in my heart
Distance didnt break us apart my fiancee

But when i return
The only i get is rejection
Your feeling only for other woman
why you lied my fiancee

Finally i know
I just dream for you
You didnt even love me
That the truth right? My fiancee
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Look up high into the beautiful sky, with a steady gaze. Lets commit this moment to our memories.
We will make the beautiful sky even brighter. I will embrace you and your wings.
I want to protect that radiance. It is what keeps me going.
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Seishi » Wed Feb 25, 2009 9:22 am

Oh this is rich. Now I see why KS wanted me to participate. Not that haiku is the "easiest" form for me, but it is the shortest, so I will start off with one of those. Later on I'll make time to write some meaningful stuff ahahahaha. Bonus points if KS can guess who these two characters are.

Glimmering twilight,
Your life is a fading dream,
Make the decision

Keep searching my love,
True friendship born from chaos,
Eyes that will not lie
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Chocola » Wed Feb 25, 2009 8:00 pm

Hm, are you sure these aren't some gay Touhou characters that you know I have no chance of guessing?
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1) Ayu?
2) Ami?
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by raizoo » Wed Feb 25, 2009 8:26 pm

I got bullied into at least participating.

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Starlight Breaking White Devil
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Corni » Wed Feb 25, 2009 9:23 pm

Great work raizoo...
That seriously a very amateur poem lol...
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by FNSNA » Thu Feb 26, 2009 8:25 am

haiku is not really my strength, but here it goes

One step, one more step
I walked on the summer end...
fading to her arms
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Fate » Fri Feb 27, 2009 11:07 pm

It's longShow
The lightning queen that paves my melancholy days into ones of peacefulness
The thunder goddess that has delivered salvation unto me
The unlimited moe works entity that has entranced me
The unlimited sex appeal being that has been fixated within
The mechanisms of my mind, my inner soul, my physical mortal self

The scarlet pupils that sends sensual signals through a radius of millions of light years
Her golden-haired twintails are absolutely alluring
Her ribbons have the ability of causing an even greater degree of admiration towards her
Her milky white skin penetrates my heart
Her firm, soft breasts are beneficial for my body
Her smile is tender soft, sweet, and evokes sentimental feelings
Her cunning strategies on the battlefield portrays another breathtaking characteristic
Her intelligent device receives the prevailing sensations of envy
Her faithful attitude augments my loving capability
Her awesome, smooth legs are yet again, complementary to her dynamic personality
Her afterimage is imprinted onto my enigmatic inner workings

She is one who I dearly cherish
And all the non-believers shall perish
My love for her is infinity plus proportions
I cannot and will not remove my hardcore, terminal obsession over her
One cannot fathom her legacy
And all who oppose her is considered heresy
My eternal adoration for her simply cannot cease

She is the only one who is more addictive than ecstasy
She is far above the existing
More deliciously yummy that anything of this world
More powerfully intoxicating than any substance in this universe
The most diverse individual to grace history ever
I gaze, contemplate only her
I revere, worship, honor, regard, treasure, value only her

Pure-hearted, angelic, and absolutely stunning everywhere are but major understatements
Her aura burns brighter than any star out there
Her radiance shines and vanquishes the darkest of depths
Her extraordinarily seductive skills entices people to love her
The light that she emits is utilized to guide stranded warriors and the like
She is a luxuriant immortal flower that blossoms forever
The perfect, all-in-one, enchanting, amiable, and adorable entity
No words, phrases, sentences, paragraphs, essays
Can depict the level of her omnipotency of the qualities she possesses
And thus, I pray…Unlimited Fate Works shall reign for eternity
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Corni » Fri Feb 27, 2009 11:52 pm

That really good Fate...
My english suck nowadays so i cant write poem good as you...

but i will try again next time...
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Fate » Fri Feb 27, 2009 11:57 pm

Thank you. I am truly proud of myself and Fate Testarossa/Fate T. Harlaown herself. ^__^;
I look forward to your poem as well haha.
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by FNSNA » Sun Mar 01, 2009 8:31 pm

Fate, your poem, so many hard words o.o o.o
good ;) ;)
and I see how your poem is more of a third person view on Fate, and not first person..
unlike mine :roll: (I find it better to make first person ones more then third person ones...weird?)
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Fate » Sun Mar 01, 2009 9:59 pm

Hmm, I didn't want to start out with 'I' for every single line so thought my method would be better. I found it to be a decent combo between first and third person imo. And thanks. 8-)
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by FNSNA » Mon Mar 02, 2009 12:19 am

Fate wrote:Hmm, I didn't want to start out with 'I' for every single line so thought my method would be better. I found it to be a decent combo between first and third person imo. And thanks. 8-)
O....you got a point...I ended up using too many 'I' in my Mai's poem, looks quite amatureish ^^; ^^;
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by kevo » Thu Mar 05, 2009 12:01 am

Warning: EXPLICIT LYRICS


Yo. Yo yo. Shamal, gimme some of dem funk-ass beats.

...das right, check this shit out. Hayate is in the house today. Holla at yo' ni*ga right here

H-dawg Hayate that's what my homies call me
reppin' the Mahou Shoujo cuz I'm straight O.G.
I'm about to smoke this hood, ISML 09
Cuz' I roll straight pimpin' and my bitches are fine
I'm rollin' in my wheelchair, Uzi out the side
It's called a drive-by, nig*a, and I'm poppin in my ride

The Wolkenritter knights (holla), Yeah that's my crew
don't even get me started what they can do to you
Vita.
wut?
Yeah she can fuck you up.
Take her hammer out she can shut you up. werd
Shamal.
holla
Straight up pimpin.
I got Hayate's back, and if you mess, you be limpin'
I shine on the battlefield, flyin' higher than Kobe
don't like my style? then you can go blow me
Klairewind flying hard outta dis here ring
I can blow you away like it ain't no thing.

Yo, Signum in the house and I got my master's back
To the left to the right and the fast attack
Fate Testarossa's just a punk
She thinks she can win another contest, dats bunk
I say the only thing she can win is a whippin from Hayate-sama. Ya heard?


Ere body that's in ISML, line up
Ere body that's gonna get a whuppin, werd up
I'm taking this contest by storm
And I'm getting the votes
even votes from the goats
so healthy it's like eating oats
crossin' moats with with my nice boats
bitch you better be takin' notes

Don't make me get up from this chair, I'ma fuck you up today
I'm packin' a 9 millimeter and Reinforce Zwei
Kyoto Animation, I'll take 'em all down
Ain't no one bad as me who'z living in dis town
I'll make Index wish she never was in her shitty show
Then I'll beat Reimu and Marisa. Fuck Touhou.

Shana, Anya, Osaka I cap 'em all, bitch
The Tiara is mine! I may be sweet and cute in the show, but the rest of the time it's strictly GANGSTA. Best they rename dis shit from Saimoe to Thug-moe

Ya heard?

Yo, Shamal, teleport us the fuck outta here.
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Corni » Thu Mar 05, 2009 1:07 am

Oh for me kevo your poem is bad and make me feel disgust... make a proper poem please~ IMO
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Fate » Thu Mar 05, 2009 1:20 am

LOL, I feel the same way as uis. It's horrid.
Fate Testarossa's just a punk
/failed excuse to rhyme.
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Demi. » Thu Mar 05, 2009 1:44 am

Eh...well, that poem about sums up the ISML 2008 thread in It's entirety.

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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by waterfall » Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:08 am

That actually might make me vote for Hayate more.
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