ISML Poetry Challenge!

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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Marinara » Tue Mar 24, 2009 6:19 am

^hilarious ending waterfall, I look forward to reading more works from you :p
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Blue Neko » Mon May 25, 2009 6:40 pm

Love that poem waterfall ^.^ Great great job! :D
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by 4thelol » Sun May 31, 2009 3:28 pm

haha sick poem XD
hope u will stuck in the class againt for the sake of good poem like this lawlz :mrgreen:
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by walyi » Wed Jul 08, 2009 3:43 pm

I'm sorry I just can write it in Chinese
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Fate » Tue Sep 29, 2009 9:12 pm

I dedicated a Shakespearean sonnet to Fate Testarossa. A Shakespearean sonnet consists of 3 quatrains of 4 lines each and a couplet of two lines. There are 10 syllables and 5 feet for each line making it a total of 14 lines.

Her light is bright like the sun's ray I rest
It was on me a feast for the wonders
She has a true happy look that was best
Her self stood up and saw the face under

She is one who excites me and to have
Me to reach a constant state of trance
The light can dance and prance for all the paths
A heart is thrust upon like a mad lance

By the thread of hope will emit kindly
Ever wish up the sky yonder playful
That way I won’t run from my sweet blindly
Fate is pure love and is always graceful

Yet the shadows will come and take from me
I wish it won’t oh no precious one flee
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Juice » Thu Oct 01, 2009 8:19 am

Fate wrote:I dedicated a Shakespearean sonnet to Fate Testarossa. A Shakespearean sonnet consists of 3 quatrains of 4 lines each and a couplet of two lines. There are 10 syllables and 5 feet for each line making it a total of 14 lines.

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Don't forget it has the rhyme scheme of ABAB CDCD EFEF GG.
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Fate » Thu Oct 01, 2009 5:31 pm

Oh yeah, forgot to mention that in my previous post but I did fulfill the criteria~ Also has a metaphor, simile, and personification.
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Nobody wants to wake up to an empty home
Nobody ever wants to be alone
It's hard to let the ones you love go
Now that Fate's presence is here
She makes me smile
Everyday I wake up
I see Fate's pleasant and serene face
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Chocola » Thu Oct 01, 2009 10:33 pm

...Not what I expected when I created this thread.
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Fate » Thu Oct 01, 2009 10:53 pm

The thread is pretty much de-vitalized anyways. Fate deserves the lovin'.
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Fate » Mon Nov 02, 2009 12:21 am

With her, I can reach this peace everlasting
She’s just so mesmerizing
I wanna hold her tightly
Oh please, I’m not doing this blindly
She always possesses that wonderful brilliance
She shines with the most beautiful radiance
Lovable all over is how I find
She captures my mind
My heart is full of cold
So let her warmth unfold
These feelings are interlocked with her deep remembrances
I’ve always been blessed since
It’s been soooo long ago
Oh how I dearly miss you, Feito
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