ISML Poetry Challenge!

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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by kevo » Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:39 am

See, imo it would be better if it were actually performed, like with a beat. Because in my head it's pretty catchy.
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Demi. » Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:55 am

'Cause rap doesn't belong in a poem.

Make lyrics out of it or something.
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by FNSNA » Thu Mar 05, 2009 3:11 am

kevo, I find your Hayate-chan 'poem' offensive DDD:
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Fate » Thu Mar 05, 2009 3:13 am

I found it more overwhelmingly atrocious to my beloved Fate.
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by kevo » Thu Mar 05, 2009 3:21 am

FNSNA wrote:kevo, I find your Hayate-chan 'poem' offensive DDD:
I find your need to put quotes around poem when referring to rap offensive DDD:

Actually not really.
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Corni » Thu Mar 05, 2009 3:59 am

lol we need new thread... post your lyric thread...
i didnt want poem thread defile with rap,hip-hop or anything that not actual poem...
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by kevo » Thu Mar 05, 2009 7:59 am

If your sig wasn't Fortune Arterial, I'd probably get into a heated argument with you defending rap as a poetic art for but hey ;)
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Demi. » Thu Mar 05, 2009 8:03 am

The ra-..poem, was just a bit too much, I think.

Am surprised it was focused on Hayate, and not Nanoha, though..
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Chocola » Thu Mar 05, 2009 8:45 am

Well kevo, I thought the poem was good. But of course, I actually like rap so I might be biased.
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by -synchronizer- » Thu Mar 05, 2009 8:50 am

There is no question that song lyrics can be a form of poetry. Personal feelings about the song or genre don't change that. (I don't like rap, though I will admit that I do not know much beyond the extremely well-known and general stereotypes due to my lack of interest)

kevo's just made me laugh and shake my head. :lol:
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by kevo » Thu Mar 05, 2009 9:13 am

Yeah it wasn't serious lol. It was more parody/satire. I don't even like Hayate that much :P
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Chocola » Thu Mar 05, 2009 4:52 pm

Ah, synchronizer, that was wise. What you just said reminded me of people who drop anime after 1 episode and then saying they hate it, even though they didn't even watch it enough. Of course, you're not one of them. :D
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Corni » Thu Mar 05, 2009 7:44 pm

Oh well because my lack of knowledge of western literature... i just accept your poem kevo...
But for me i dislike poem that flame other character and using some rude/harsh word when not necessary...

For us Asian moral/ethic in poem is important... *lol actually just me*
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Fate » Thu Mar 05, 2009 9:07 pm

I'd like to see an R&B type of poem. Or one as pro as mine. o:
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by waterfall » Tue Mar 10, 2009 11:58 pm

So I had a class canceled today, and instead of doing anything productive I wrote a really really weird Kanon rap thingy. Fuck you Kevo for giving me weird ideas.

Basically: What if Ayu had ambitions to be a gangsta rapper?
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Yuuichi: Um, Hi guys. Uh, Ayu really wanted to do this rap…
Ayu: Straight up fucker.
Yuuichi: … So yeah. Um.
Nayuki: Fighto! daiyo?
Yuuichi:

Yo yo Yuuichi here, I’m pretty cool
Kittagawa doesn’t count, so I’m the only guy in school.
Being the only male over here is great
Buildin’ ma harem ever since I was eight
So any girls over here lookin’ for a good time
Call so I can date a girl who looks older than nine
Now let’s really get this place buzzin
Handin’ of to big N, my incestuous cuzzin

Um. Nayuki, that’s you.
Nayuki: zzzzzz… nyuu?...zzzzz…
Ayu: Fuckin’ ho, she’s crampin’ my rhymes.
Yuuichi: Why don’t you go Mai.
Voice from audience: You can do it Mai! Ahahaha~
Mai:

After I stand watch
I return to a night of
Hawt Sayuri sex

*awkward silence*
Yuuichi: …wait what?
Shiori: Uh, you were supposed to rap, not write a haiku.
Yuuichi: Wait, is that true??
Mai: Honey Bear.
Yuuichi: I’ve missed my chance for a threesome with Mai and Sayuri to be with Ayu? I knew I picked the wrong girl…
Shiori: Uhh… I’ll go now I guess…

Shiori here, generic “sick girl”
Survived mystery disease, I can take on the world
Key tried to kill me, which kinda blows
Fought them off, though I only have one set of clothes
Now I’m drawing, eating ice cream, having fun
All others can’t compare—Shiori’s number one!

Suck it Kaori. Handing off to Ayu.

Yuuichi: Oh god.
*Haruhi appears*
Haruhi: Yes?
Yuuichi: Huh? Wtf, stop following me and insisting I’m “Kyon”. I don’t even know who this Kyon guy is.
Ayu: Shut up you. I’m gonna heat this place up hotter than fresh Taiyaki.

Ayu Ayu here, double ‘em straight
Livin’ on the street since I was eight
Straight up gangsta, wit multiple crimes
Stealing from bakers and layin’ dangerous rhymes
I may be short, but I’m no small fry
Got wings on my back ‘cause my rhymes are so fly
So wazzup cats, I be reppin’ this hood
Uguu~ motherfuckers, Ayu is just too good.

*starts attempting to breakdance*
Yuuichi: …that didn’t even make sense.
Mai: I want a beef bowl.
Yuuichi: That reminds me… You and Sayuri doing anything later tonight?

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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Teiran » Wed Mar 11, 2009 1:32 am

That was epic, dude. English graduate approved.

And if somebody pointed out the fact you have no wings...
...wouldn't mean a thing.
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by kevo » Fri Mar 13, 2009 3:12 am

ok, the rhythm is terribly generic (though I must say on paper it works tons better than mine). But besides that I basically couldn't stop laughing. A+++
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by waterfall » Tue Mar 17, 2009 11:30 pm

In honor of our first match:

The curtains open, the trumpets blare
Moe contestants march on to the stage
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As the tournament writes its opening page

Who will triumph? Who will fail?
Who will claim the jewels of the sea
The opening act of this epic tale
From oceans to a tiara of majesty

Yes this noble tourney has only begun
As we joyously welcome a new moe age
For-- wait, she lost? The other girl won?
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by Matteas » Sun Mar 22, 2009 9:13 pm

Very good topic. I was trying to think up something when I was taking a bath.
So here I come. It is just a tanka, because I had to keep it short to not forget it before I get out of the bath.

The Queen of Lightnings
dancing in the moonlight sky
like a butterfly
looking for a vacant bloom
pierced my heart with jolt of love.
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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Post by waterfall » Mon Mar 23, 2009 9:32 pm

(Written during a very boring psych class)

Nanoha on the couch:

“I’ll tell you doc, I’m at the end of my rope.
You have to help me, you’re my last hope.
Magical girls are supposed to be nice,
But I’m always jealous, it’s my biggest vice.
And Feito’s so perfect, so nice and so kind;
I feel insecure-- it’s a serious bind.
Fate Testarossa? What a cool name!
Compared to that, “Nanoha” just sounds so lame.
And meanwhile Bardiche is totally gar;
Raging Heart can’t compete, it’s duller by far.
And now Arisa likes Fate more than me!
Fate with her stupid blushes and glee.
That’s why I’ve sought psychological help
Because compared to her I feel lower than kelp.”

The doctor didn’t know what he could do.
He couldn’t say “Fate is more moe than you”.
So he looked into space and stroked his chin.
Then he figured it out, and the “problem” was WIN.

“I got it!” he cried, “You’re too repressed!
That is why you are currently stressed.
You really love Fate but lie to yourself.
This sexual frustration is bad for your health.
So now you can end your diatribe;
A double dose of yuri is what I prescribe.
It will fix every problem you’ve got
Plus Nano x Fate sounds really hawt.”
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