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Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 6:19 am
by Marinara
^hilarious ending waterfall, I look forward to reading more works from you :p

Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 6:40 pm
by Blue Neko
Love that poem waterfall ^.^ Great great job! :D

Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 3:28 pm
by 4thelol
haha sick poem XD
hope u will stuck in the class againt for the sake of good poem like this lawlz :mrgreen:

Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 3:43 pm
by walyi
I'm sorry I just can write it in Chinese

Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 9:12 pm
by Fate
I dedicated a Shakespearean sonnet to Fate Testarossa. A Shakespearean sonnet consists of 3 quatrains of 4 lines each and a couplet of two lines. There are 10 syllables and 5 feet for each line making it a total of 14 lines.

Her light is bright like the sun's ray I rest
It was on me a feast for the wonders
She has a true happy look that was best
Her self stood up and saw the face under

She is one who excites me and to have
Me to reach a constant state of trance
The light can dance and prance for all the paths
A heart is thrust upon like a mad lance

By the thread of hope will emit kindly
Ever wish up the sky yonder playful
That way I won’t run from my sweet blindly
Fate is pure love and is always graceful

Yet the shadows will come and take from me
I wish it won’t oh no precious one flee

Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 8:19 am
by Juice
Fate wrote:I dedicated a Shakespearean sonnet to Fate Testarossa. A Shakespearean sonnet consists of 3 quatrains of 4 lines each and a couplet of two lines. There are 10 syllables and 5 feet for each line making it a total of 14 lines.

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Don't forget it has the rhyme scheme of ABAB CDCD EFEF GG.

Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 5:31 pm
by Fate
Oh yeah, forgot to mention that in my previous post but I did fulfill the criteria~ Also has a metaphor, simile, and personification.
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Nobody wants to wake up to an empty home
Nobody ever wants to be alone
It's hard to let the ones you love go
Now that Fate's presence is here
She makes me smile
Everyday I wake up
I see Fate's pleasant and serene face

Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 10:33 pm
by Chocola
...Not what I expected when I created this thread.

Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 10:53 pm
by Fate
The thread is pretty much de-vitalized anyways. Fate deserves the lovin'.

Re: ISML Poetry Challenge!

Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 12:21 am
by Fate
With her, I can reach this peace everlasting
She’s just so mesmerizing
I wanna hold her tightly
Oh please, I’m not doing this blindly
She always possesses that wonderful brilliance
She shines with the most beautiful radiance
Lovable all over is how I find
She captures my mind
My heart is full of cold
So let her warmth unfold
These feelings are interlocked with her deep remembrances
I’ve always been blessed since
It’s been soooo long ago
Oh how I dearly miss you, Feito